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SUPERVlXEN · F
Let me know when you get to the joke about Homan walking into the bar, and later outside agaon with a $50,000. That's gonna be a total cracker! Keep working on your material, you might make it one day!
SUPERVlXEN · F
@AmericanVibes
No chance.
AmericanVibes · 41-45, M
@SUPERVlXEN
SUPERVlXEN · F
@AmericanVibes

HijabaDabbaDoo · F Best Comment
You can say his name y'know, I promise you won't summon him
@AmericanVibes my brother in christ you've been crying for a while.

MUSLIM
Did you flinch? lmao
AmericanVibes · 41-45, M
@HijabaDabbaDoo No, but I’m crying so hard of your mean comments I just solved the world water crisis for an entire town. I even gave you best comment and this is the thanks you give 😭😭😭😭
AmericanVibes · 41-45, M
@HijabaDabbaDoo
CougarLisa · 36-40, F
AbbeyRhode · F
Gotta love picturing those three doing an honest day's work. 😄
Northwest · M
The end it's my first attempt as a skit writer don't laugh to hard

You should keep your day job. You have one, right? And it's a job you invented all by yourself?
AmericanVibes · 41-45, M
@Northwest but if I keep my day job does that mean I can do comedy at night at least?
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Hmm, maybe next time you write a sketch, first learn about the topic first. Because none of this describes how socialism works or how these people claim it does.
AmericanVibes · 41-45, M
@NerdyPotato Oh wow, thank you so much for that enlightening critique really, where would I be without your wisdom? I had no idea research was a thing. Next time I’ll be sure to get your expert advice on socialism before writing a comedy sketch. This is Truly life-changing feedback. Maybe you can even join me on the road to different comedy clubs
@AmericanVibes
I had no idea research was a thing.
That was pretty clear from this attempt. It's a bit confusing to put that in the middle of a bunch of sarcasm though.
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AmericanVibes · 41-45, M
@FoxyQueen Thank you so much for your thoughtful and extremely detailed feedback I’ll absolutely take every word into deep consideration as I move forward with my future endeavors. Truly, it's rare to receive such passionate input from someone so committed and taking the time to type it out. Your insights will serve as a shining example of my future endeavors.
FoxyQueen · 51-55, F
@AmericanVibes https://thecomedycrowd.com/how-to-write-a-comedy-sketch/
Thinkerbell · 41-45, F
All three: "You no-good bourgeois capitalist! You're exploiting the working class!"
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A conservative walks into a club to tell jokes.

•••crickets•••
4meAndyou · F
That's one former communist who became a Democrat-Socialist, one communist, and one communist pretending to be a Democrat-Socialist!
SandWitch · 26-30, F
Okay, I won't laugh at all then.

Perhaps you should go back to England where most Americans came from?

Like they say, if you can make it in England, you can make it anywhere.
llswag · 18-21, F
@SandWitch Most Americans are from Germany actually!!! :)
llswag · 18-21, F
Muslims, ewwwwwwwwwwwwww :(

 
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