a new poem

A new user that's a poet????

This is actually lit :v
Poetry is such an underrated art

Deep. You are good in your way of thinking for the art of poetry. But for a haiku there are 3 lines. 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables. Usually pertaining to nature or a metaphor for something.
I think for your way of thinking you should try an epic balad or lyrical poetry. Use the same words in a longer story describing the way you feel in a moment in your life.

it seems nice even if I dont understand it :)