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a new poem

There is quite a beauty
To insanity
That i will never forget
But will overcome
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GuyWithOpinions · 31-35, M
Deep. You are good in your way of thinking for the art of poetry. But for a haiku there are 3 lines. 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables. Usually pertaining to nature or a metaphor for something.
I think for your way of thinking you should try an epic balad or lyrical poetry. Use the same words in a longer story describing the way you feel in a moment in your life.