I have a weird sense of humor

The butt end of the rifle is supposed to be pressed firmly against the shoulder and her eye is supposed to be away from the scope, not pressed into it.

Other than that, the posture's decent, except for one thing...

And that's to stand with one leg back for better stability when she squeezes the trigger, otherwise, the recoil would land her flat on her back.

on the upside shes doing well with trigger discipline

Wrong stance.

so this started out as a joke and turned into 'proper firearm use

Arrgh