How does email sound to a prospective employer?

Hello____

My name is______ and I have been trying to contact you regarding the positions that I have applyed for with [company].

I am very interested in working for the company because _____and think it will be a great opportunity for me to _____.

How do I politely ask for an interview?

Details:
-I have applied for numerous jobs for this company.
-They called me last month and i missed the call. i was honestly in CPR class, which was minimum qualification FOR the job.
-I returned their call and haven't heard back. I called weekly for about a month.
-Each number they give me, when I call, leads to ONE voice-mail system. The person has not returned my calls so I asked for the persons email.
-I have asked for an interview via voice-mail but again, they don't return call.

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zeeva70 · F

Instead of the e-mail, I probably would find someone who works at any company you're interested in or a position you'd like to have and schedule an informal interview with them. Your goal with this is not asking for a job but learning about the company, industry, dream job, networking, etc. Linkedin is probably one of the best resources for this.

iamnikki · 31-35, F

@zeeva70 thank you. I did this at my internship site but didn't think to use linked in to do this

zeeva70 · F

@iamnikki Good. Keep doing it because it's a wonderful technique to repeat. Professionals use Linkedin.

Dontbeanass · 36-40, F

They honestly probably already filled the position and that’s why you aren’t getting calls back. The email sounds good but I would also just start looking for a similar job somewhere else.

iamnikki · 31-35, F

@Dontbeanass For the position I applied for last month, yes, I"m sure they have. But I've applied for numerous positions, the last one was yesterday. They are posting new potions all the time and I apply for them.

Burnley123 · 41-45, M

If they are not returning you calls, I'd move on.

iamnikki · 31-35, F

@Burnley123 I've applied for numerous potions. I'm not looking to get hired for the one I applied for last month.
I think it's the perfect start for me, working in my field.

SW-User

I won't begin with hello

iamnikki · 31-35, F

@SW-User Good Afternoon [name].
Better?

MarkPaul · 26-30, M

Reads like a form email.

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