I liked this. It seems to be the way in relationships. Women express themselves to the men they love. And the men help them, but they also retain a wall of sorts. Is it the stereotypical way that men seem to feel? The way they must remain strong and in-charge and not appear vulnerable? I express all of my fears to my mate. I know things bother him yet he is reluctant to share. He says your plate is full so why would I add my worries to it? I say because it is a two-way street not a one-way one. It bothers me still...
You seem to write well in my opinion. So continue. I do like your words, Flash man.

I can actually feel the melancholy in him. A kind of a reverie, like he is saying goodbye to something.
So you are actually a good writer. Kudos.

Beautiful writing :) is this from a personal experience?

tht ws amazing :)
n no..i never hide anything from my best friend..one friend..just one..who knows it all :)

You should consider professional writing. You're good

Well written.

Great writing

btw, how was ur oral exam ? :D