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my bloom (poetry)


my bloom

I’ll let you
roam my gardens now,
but please be gentle where you tread.

I’ll let you
place me in fresh soil,
my hungry flower must be fed.

I’ll let you
quench my thirst with rain,
dripping wet from the sky above.

I’ll let you
slowly coax my bloom,
so you can feel my blossomed love.

I’ll let you
feel my leaves brush by,
soft as a breeze upon your cheek.

I’ll let you
taste my petals now,
as I tremble, and knees grow weak.
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Nice piece about giving oneself over. The ultimate gift. The flow of it is very good as per usual. Nicely done
@JustGoneNow Ty and for MLK day.

https://similarworlds.com/thoughts/personal-feelings/4587569-I-am-not-less-I-am-not-less-we-come-from-different
Bertie · 46-50, F
Let me tell you how awesome this is❣️🥀🥰
@Bertie Aww, ty. Very kind. 🦋
Fungirlmmm · 51-55, F
@Fungirlmmm ty 🖤🤗😘
Fungirlmmm · 51-55, F
@JustGoneNow You're welcome.
SW-User
Very beautiful and leaves me tingling
@SW-User

https://similarworlds.com/thoughts/personal-feelings/3580092-Fingers-Touch-Fingers-Touch-My-petals-open-softly
Absolutely beautiful...and very descriptive language..."Ill let you quench my thirst with rain dripping wet from the sky above" ...simply beautiful
@Zenbra 😊

https://similarworlds.com/thoughts/personal-feelings/3580092-Fingers-Touch-Fingers-Touch-My-petals-open-softly
Nevaeh0081 · 36-40, F
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
@Nevaeh0081 *turns up the heat a little*

https://similarworlds.com/thoughts/personal-feelings/3580092-Fingers-Touch-Fingers-Touch-My-petals-open-softly
MtnManJohn · 61-69, M
@MtnManJohn ty 🦋
Lovely. 💗
@PhoenixPhail ty 🌸

 
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