A moment on the cliff

I stood alone
On a craggy cliff
High above waters
Crashing against shores
Wind raged around me
Pulling my hair wild, loose
Feet firmly planted
Keeping my balance
Spoke your name
In my thoughts
Called your name
From my lips
I have seen you
In my dreams
I have known you
Before in time
All the imagery
All the words
You could be mine.

*All rights reserved. PoetryNEmotion aka Poe. 2022-12-01.

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robingoodfellow · M

Very passionate.
Your emotions mirroring the relentless fury of the elements around you.
It's like you, the water and the wind are as one united.
Impossible to tell where you end and they begin.

PoetryNEmotion · F

@robingoodfellow Your words matter to me, Robin, thank you.

ShadowWorker · 61-69, F

That was nice! ... I enjoyed reading this.

PoetryNEmotion · F

@ShadowWorker Why, thank you, SW. The imagery sings!

ShadowWorker · 61-69, F

@PoetryNEmotion yes indeed!...it does.

cuddles1266 · 70-79, M

Lovely poem. I can feel the wind and the longing.

PoetryNEmotion · F

@cuddles1266 Thank you, cuddles. I appreciate this.

Heartlander · 80-89, M

I love that. Thanks for sharing.

PoetryNEmotion · F

@Heartlander Thank you so much, Heartlander. I just spun it!

Quimliqer · 70-79, M

Very nice, with a feeling!!

PoetryNEmotion · F

@Quimliqer Thank you, Quim. A few people here still enjoy poetry. :)

kodiac · 22-25, M

Awesome word pictures!

PoetryNEmotion · F

@kodiac Thank you, Kodi. I saw an image and I spun poetry from it. It has been in my mind for a few days. :)

Eddiesolds · 61-69, M

This is really nice. Lucky guy!

Jungleman · M

what load of rubbish that was.

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kodiac · 22-25, M

@Jungleman Who shit in your lunchbox douchebag?🤬

PoetryNEmotion · F

@RobinPhoenix Cannot critique what has no problem. My poetry is nearly always met with good comments as I spin to make people feel. Have a fireside evening, my friend. Until soon.

PoetryNEmotion · F

@kodiac Kodi, it is okay. Thank you for your defense. He could jump off the cliff. It is all taken care of, hon.

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