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Poem Title: If

If I decide to sleep a little late today
Would you notice the dark circles under my eyes?
If I decide not to brush my hair today
Would you notice my hair’s unruliness and flyaways?
If I decide, despite my cheerfulness, to be quiet today
Would you feel the emptiness in the room because of my absence?
If I decide to put lots of dots on my usual okays…
Would you notice my racing thoughts and mindless chaos?
If I decide not to take your hand on our late-night walks
Would you notice I’m already slipping away?
If I decide not to respond to your kisses today
Would you notice my love diminishing, day by day?
And if one day I stop asking these questions—
Would you notice then, or would it still feel the same?

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Got sloppy with the drawing.

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ScreamingFox · 41-45, F
Beautifully written and illustrated. Thank you for sharing and cheers to expressing yourself out loud. Not only does it help you, it gives others courage as well.
stayfickle · 26-30, F
@ScreamingFox thank you very much.
This poem is actually for those people who longed to be seen. :)
ScreamingFox · 41-45, F
@stayfickle felt. I'm also invisible
stayfickle · 26-30, F
@ScreamingFox oh I see all of you lots.

Though I hope you find someone (can be a friend or a lover ) who can really “see” you on days you feel invisible.
JRVanguard · 26-30, M
Beautiful 💙
stayfickle · 26-30, F
@JRVanguard thank you very much!!!
HowtoDestroyAngels · 46-50, M
I started crying This is beautiful.
stayfickle · 26-30, F
@HowtoDestroyAngels sorry didn’t mean to.
Here’s the tissue:
❤that drawing is awesome :)
stayfickle · 26-30, F
@CookieCrisp thank you :)
@stayfickle thanx for sharing
Yes..yes..yes..yes..yes..yes and yes 🤗🌻
antonioioio · 70-79, M
Nothing sloppy about that drawn
If you don't mind me saying so
Ferric67 · M
Somber tragedy
with honesty
stayfickle · 26-30, F
@Ferric67 Thank you - i enjoy writing melodramatic pieces despite the gloominess of it. :)

 
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