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If you don't listen to people's music videos do me a favor and listen to this one...

I have been making two minute songs so I could could practice recording as well as other stuff.
With this song I wanted to write a lead.
I got a backing track on line so I didn't need to write the whole song I just wanted to write a lead. A good lead.
It needed to have a memorable melody to act as an ear worm. So I came up with two.
So, if you have ever listened to anything I have recorded I am sloppy. LOL
I know about the sloppy parts I want to know about the melody and if it's catchy
So if you actually give this a listen I would love to hear what you think about the composition.
Thank you.
[media=https://youtu.be/Tb0q1Lk-W78]
Matt85 · 36-40, M
Dainbramadge · 56-60, M
@Matt85 Thank you. I have been working on formatting my lead overs to have actual relatable melodies.
I think I am getting better but it's always good to get second opinions so I post my stuff here to see what the public thinks.
I am very happy you liked it. :-)
AdaXI · 41-45, T
Yeah I like that a lot the intro reminds me of a Maiden song's intro but I can't for the life in me remember which one it was. Really good through nice build up where do you get all the video stuff from? I mean it's cool that it all fits together as a music video has a nice and tidy polished look to it.
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Dainbramadge · 56-60, M
@AdaXI Thank you.
I got all the footage from the free be's link Pixabay and places like that.
I got like four sites I milk for free footage,
Some where in time may be the song your thinking of by Maiden.
Now that I think of it it does have some similarities.
Hey stop giving my secrets away. LOL
AdaXI · 41-45, T
@Dainbramadge Haha yeah I couldn't make my mind up if I was thinking of Caught Somewhere in Time or Deja Vu or a merge of the two so I thought f%k it I'll just say a Maiden song, lolz, but yeah you can see where I'm going with that one has that sorta Maiden like intro vibe too it.
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Dainbramadge · 56-60, M
@AdaXI Yeah that is the way with a lot of songs.
I will be playing along with somebodies song and all of a sudden it becomes someone else's song. LOL
But yeah I can hear maiden in it too.
Funny I haven't heard that in years. LOL
Lostpoet · M
I really like it these are the words that came to mind while listening and watching the composition


She runs on
Blacknight
she runs on
Blacknight
run on Blacknight
run on Blacknight
white light striking
thunder lightning
she runs on
Run on Blacknight
Blacknight run on
the road is long
and the storm is strong
She runs on
unbridled she runs on
the rain comes on
and the night is long
Blacknight runs on
Dainbramadge · 56-60, M
@Lostpoet Thanks man. I did a lot of things different on this one.
I spent more time making the lead have multiple melodies and actually I think, sound wise, it was my best recording yet.
Different sound for the guitar.
Used an actual complete backing track.
A few other things that I know happened I just can't think of them. LOL

Black night. That may have to be the next song.
Black night like the Knight and night... Hummm a video is coming to mind.
Lostpoet · M
@Dainbramadge I really liked the sound and the video good job man.👏
Dainbramadge · 56-60, M
@Lostpoet Thank you brother.
I come back to this. The instrumental takes me somewhere I want to go. Friday night music. End of the week stuff. I love this.
Dainbramadge · 56-60, M
@PoetryNEmotion I am really glad you like it.
Each song I do I am working on at least one aspect, more actually, of writing and recording.
I have a lot of time on my hands so I spend it bettering my music. At least I hope it's getting better. LOL
I think of each song as the end of the week test on what I have learned earlier.
@Dainbramadge Loved it! ❤️
Awesome!!! I've been trying to find your channel again for a while now!!! Thanks for the link... 🙂🙂🙂
Dainbramadge · 56-60, M
@HootyTheNightOwl Thank you Hooty.
SW-User
The backing track works. The lead is very good. Now who did the video? The video was awesome too.
Dainbramadge · 56-60, M
@SW-User LOL. Thanks man. I really appreciate your input because I am pretty sure if it was garbage you would say ... " Keep working at it " LOL
I made the video as well. Glad you like it my brother.
Handfull1 · 61-69, F
Very moody if that’s what you were aiming for. It fit the title “Dark Horse”!
Dainbramadge · 56-60, M
@Handfull1 The song started as the backing track and I just jammed along with it til I found a melody starting point then I spent a few days making the sound work.
So I guess you can say it just kind of happened. LOL
I like it. It has a haunting sound to it. Strong. Do you have more,.. ?
Dainbramadge · 56-60, M
@PoetryNEmotion Thank you. :-)
I have a bunch but nothing really like this.
I try different styles but mostly the heavier stuff is what I end up doing.
I actually have a place on my profile that has all my music in the same spot.
Don't know where that is but I put it there. LOL
I have an idea for something you may be able to help me with.
I will PM you my idea, or what I am shooting for.
@Dainbramadge I look forward to this. Thank you. Dark horses are the best.
caPnAhab · 26-30, M
Oo! Spectacular jam, man! I had a great time listening
Dainbramadge · 56-60, M
@caPnAhab Thanks a bunch. :-)
Glad you liked it. :-)
kodiac · 22-25, M
This you playing ?
Dainbramadge · 56-60, M
@kodiac Yeah. Well that's me playing the lead guitar the rest is a backing track I got on line.
kodiac · 22-25, M
@Dainbramadge My honest opinion? Holy shit dude !! That's awesome!!!
Dainbramadge · 56-60, M
@kodiac Hey!! That makes you my new bestest buddy. LOL
No but really thanks for that.
I changed the sound of the guitar to fit this and then actually spent about three days writing the lead rather than just jamming out a bunch of riffs.
Thanks again. :-)
kodiac · 22-25, M
Have you heard this kid? [media=https://youtu.be/VpBewQPPwag]
Dainbramadge · 56-60, M
@kodiac I was just going through your profile and this is what I was just listening to.
I hate him and I don't want to talk about it. LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!
He is bad ass dude.
I am seeing my 13 year old pounding out tunes like this in the near future. :-)
SW-User
Dainbramadge · 56-60, M
@SW-User Thank you. I am happy you gave it a listen. :-)
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Dainbramadge · 56-60, M
@Davado Thanks for listening. :-)

 
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