If you don't listen to people's music videos do me a favor and listen to this one...

I have been making two minute songs so I could could practice recording as well as other stuff.
With this song I wanted to write a lead.
I got a backing track on line so I didn't need to write the whole song I just wanted to write a lead. A good lead.
It needed to have a memorable melody to act as an ear worm. So I came up with two.
So, if you have ever listened to anything I have recorded I am sloppy. LOL
I know about the sloppy parts I want to know about the melody and if it's catchy
So if you actually give this a listen I would love to hear what you think about the composition.
Thank you.
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AdaXI · 41-45, T

Yeah I like that a lot the intro reminds me of a Maiden song's intro but I can't for the life in me remember which one it was. Really good through nice build up where do you get all the video stuff from? I mean it's cool that it all fits together as a music video has a nice and tidy polished look to it.
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Dainbramadge · 56-60, M

@AdaXI Thank you.
I got all the footage from the free be's link Pixabay and places like that.
I got like four sites I milk for free footage,
Some where in time may be the song your thinking of by Maiden.
Now that I think of it it does have some similarities.
Hey stop giving my secrets away. LOL

AdaXI · 41-45, T

@Dainbramadge Haha yeah I couldn't make my mind up if I was thinking of Caught Somewhere in Time or Deja Vu or a merge of the two so I thought f%k it I'll just say a Maiden song, lolz, but yeah you can see where I'm going with that one has that sorta Maiden like intro vibe too it.
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Dainbramadge · 56-60, M

@AdaXI Yeah that is the way with a lot of songs.
I will be playing along with somebodies song and all of a sudden it becomes someone else's song. LOL
But yeah I can hear maiden in it too.
Funny I haven't heard that in years. LOL