If you don't listen to people's music videos do me a favor and listen to this one...

I have been making two minute songs so I could could practice recording as well as other stuff.
With this song I wanted to write a lead.
I got a backing track on line so I didn't need to write the whole song I just wanted to write a lead. A good lead.
It needed to have a memorable melody to act as an ear worm. So I came up with two.
So, if you have ever listened to anything I have recorded I am sloppy. LOL
I know about the sloppy parts I want to know about the melody and if it's catchy
So if you actually give this a listen I would love to hear what you think about the composition.
Thank you.
[media=https://youtu.be/Tb0q1Lk-W78]

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Lostpoet · M

I really like it these are the words that came to mind while listening and watching the composition

She runs on
Blacknight
she runs on
Blacknight
run on Blacknight
run on Blacknight
white light striking
thunder lightning
she runs on
Run on Blacknight
Blacknight run on
the road is long
and the storm is strong
She runs on
unbridled she runs on
the rain comes on
and the night is long
Blacknight runs on

Dainbramadge · 56-60, M

@Lostpoet Thanks man. I did a lot of things different on this one.
I spent more time making the lead have multiple melodies and actually I think, sound wise, it was my best recording yet.
Different sound for the guitar.
Used an actual complete backing track.
A few other things that I know happened I just can't think of them. LOL

Black night. That may have to be the next song.
Black night like the Knight and night... Hummm a video is coming to mind.

Lostpoet · M

@Dainbramadge I really liked the sound and the video good job man.👏

Dainbramadge · 56-60, M

@Lostpoet Thank you brother.