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Still haven't figured out how to write well

A good man?


But occasionally I want to be a devil.

Not a winged beast with a pointy tail

But a crooked smile to make you lose your morals

A sense of excitement to make you question your pride

Temptation to forget the character you've made for yourself

A sense of adventure void of all inhibitions

A connection to the dark side if you will

Remember if you see a twinkle in my eye

At times I want to remove you from the mundane comfort you live

I want to corrupt you to follow your passion into my soul

Just sometimes, I want to be that devil inside you.
cycleman · 61-69, M
I guess I am going to be the only one and say your words are weak!

Get reading E.A.Poe! and really learn to capture the attention from those who'll follow your words.
Notanymore · 36-40, M
@cycleman it takes some research and educating for me to understand the concepts of Shakespeare. There's some really good teachers that will read it and go over the meaning and cut tge Victorian acting out of it. Really entertaining to hear it in a heavy, almost cockney accent
@Notanymore Love me some Shakespeare and Poe. I highly recommend Carl Sandburg.
Notanymore · 36-40, M
@Pinkstarburst I'll check that out.
@Notanymore Horse shit! The more you write the more comfortable you will become and the easier the words will flow. Smart has nothing to do with it. BUT!!! You ARE smart!
Notanymore · 36-40, M
@Pinkstarburst thank you
@Notanymore Words don’t have to be flowery or extravagant. They just have to be yours. And you’re welcome.
very talented...
@Notanymore I wish I could write like that.
Notanymore · 36-40, M
@Experienced33 I'm sure you can
@Notanymore Not my strong point.
Coralmist · 41-45, F
This was an intriguing piece...nice, NA👍🙂
Notanymore · 36-40, M
@Coralmist thank you
Lostpoet · M
You write really well
Notanymore · 36-40, M
@Lostpoet that's a great compliment coming from a poet. Thanks
iamonfire696 · 41-45, F
I don’t think you should change it. What you wrote is very good.
Notanymore · 36-40, M
@iamonfire696 thank you for the kind words
iamonfire696 · 41-45, F
@Notanymore you are very welcome 💕

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