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Still haven't figured out how to write well

A good man?

Yes!

But occasionally I want to be a devil.

Not a winged beast with a pointy tail

But a crooked smile to make you lose your morals

A sense of excitement to make you question your pride

Temptation to forget the character you've made for yourself

A sense of adventure void of all inhibitions

A connection to the dark side if you will

Remember if you see a twinkle in my eye

At times I want to remove you from the mundane comfort you live

I want to corrupt you to follow your passion into my soul

Just sometimes, I want to be that devil inside you.
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iamonfire696 · 41-45, F
I don’t think you should change it. What you wrote is very good.
Notanymore · 36-40, M
@iamonfire696 thank you for the kind words
iamonfire696 · 41-45, F
@Notanymore you are very welcome 💕