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This Old Man

cantankerous
old man
rants
raves
alone
in his home
hidden from the world
at large
so small
in mothball
smelling clothes
no one ever knows
the man he could
have been
still
when he dreams
late at night
of magnificent things
alive in his dreams
suddenly he awakes
with the smile
fading from his face
another day begins
much to his chagrin
walks ever so slowly
to his front door
opens the screen
peers out
into the world
then turns round
slowly
to his breakfast alone
at this old kitchen table
in his worn vintage chair
stares off into space
forgetting his dreams
SatyrServiceM
Loneliness, is an awful illness
it poisons the heart and mind
@SatyrService I am happy for you then. Sending you love and light.
SatyrServiceM
@PoetryNEmotion i miss the snuggle tho, the head on my shoulder thru the night
so sometimes a cat
@SatyrService I have my dog. She cuddles at times. Not a real cuddler though except in the morning for belly rubs while she lays upon her back. I am getting a puppy in July. For my birthday. If I find one, if not before end of summer.
Uncfred61-69, M
Thanks, you put it in a good way. 馃槒
@Uncfred It is just the way he was spun. If he is satisfied, then I am too. I think it is a good poem. Thank you, my dear.
Uncfred61-69, M
@PoetryNEmotion Oh yes as always a good poem, and as I said, put in a good way. You have a way of expressing thoughts, while I stumble over simple words. Looking forward to your next one. x
ColetracerM
You had me at Cantankerous!馃
@Coletracer You are more adorable than cantankerous. Did you enjoy it?
ColetracerM
@PoetryNEmotion I did.馃
Canuckle51-55, M
Wow! Poor old guy.
@Canuckle Yes, indeed. Did you feel it?
Canuckle51-55, M
@PoetryNEmotion Old? Yes sometimes. 馃槀
NimbusM
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NimbusM
@PoetryNEmotion Thankee 馃槢
smiler201256-60
@Nimbus 馃槅thought they person who wrote this was on about s,a,f nimby lol
NimbusM
@smiler2012 [image=https://giphy.com/clips/thefastsaga-fast-and-furious-saga-6-eokKCWqETE9vp3qJlq]
smiler201256-60
{@poetrynemotion] 馃rather sad in a sense really when you become a bitter old man like that when you feel real alone and rejected
@smiler2012 Yes. Tis. Yet he is a man with dreams still. Even the most sour person has worth. Even if no one sees him or visits him. I did not know you liked poetry. Thank you.

 
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