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MarkPaul · 26-30, M
There are redeeming qualities and value here with much room for improvement. Proportional placement on the plate is missing and the meat and vegetables are literally shoved against the rice. Instead, there should be a more complimentary co-existence between the two. Overall Presentation: C+
MartinTheFirst · 26-30, M
@MarkPaul Wait you just pulled the score down?
i did you a dirty
MarkPaul · 26-30, M
Overall, this looks good and nicely presented. We generally like to see some space between the portions rather than so tightly smashed together. This can best be accomplished by being more organized with your placement choices. Still, this is a solid entry with a thoughtful layout and we look forward to seeing more entries from you in the future. Presentation: A-
Overall, this looks good and nicely presented. We generally like to see some space between the portions rather than so tightly smashed together. This can best be accomplished by being more organized with your placement choices. Still, this is a solid entry with a thoughtful layout and we look forward to seeing more entries from you in the future. Presentation: A-
i did you a dirty
MarkPaul · 26-30, M
@LiLShrimp Sorry... but your grade stands. As I tell everyone, I expect... no, demand... improvement. This is all about you becoming better than you were, not staying the same. I suggest you attend my lecture on "Continuous Improvement" and review my presentation on plate placement for aesthetics, not to collect a grade. I suggest you take your presentation endeavours more seriously as we continue to move ahead.
MarkPaul · 26-30, M
@MartinTheFirst Yes you did! But, undeterred, I stand by my assessment of her latest presentation as it lacks improvement. As you taught me a long time ago with pizza dough... it's okay to make mistakes, but with practice you should see improvement with each rendering. We need to teach the world about the discipline of improvement. Now... let's inspect the organization of your fridge. 🧐
MartinTheFirst · 26-30, M
@MarkPaul but you already graded this one, you cant grade it twice 🥺
MarkPaul · 26-30, M
@MartinTheFirst I count it as a second submission. The first time it was A-. She could have (and should have) improved based on her initial assessment. Now, she is being held to a higher standard. That's the way the grading system works. 😤
MartinTheFirst · 26-30, M
@LiLShrimp 😳🥴
MarkPaul · 26-30, M
@LiLShrimp Listen you. I make the presentation grading rules here. The first time I reviewed it, yes you earned a solid A-. But, this is like resubmitting your work. And, that's Plagiarism with a capitial "P," and that stands for Problem. I suggest we have a conference... with your parents.