Thoughts on this as dating intro?

I am not sure what kind of men you are going to attract with this. The sentence "As I do, he takes care of things, his things, and himself" comes way too late in to the scene.
I would be cautious to not attract some sugar boy lol I mean, some guy willing to be taken care of by a mom-like figure?
Like others have pointed, it's too much money-oriented.

I'd say, don't begin writing from a place of fear. Like your username and picture suggests, you hold a lot more poetry and not only practicality in you. Are you a Virgo by any chance lol

It is considerate your message but I believe needs editing!
I like the ending <3

“I’ll help pay, not looking to break your bank.”

I’m not sure that part is necessary or even helpful. It kinda makes it seem like there is a focus on money. That sort of logistic can be dealt with as you get to know one another. *shrug*

Perhaps if you want to convey that, then instead you could say something like, “I am not a very materialistic person”, or something like that

Interesting…
From a man’s perspective, you described WHAT you want to do on a date —
but not the most important part: WHY you want to date.

I am interested, I do not do drugs or alcohol. I am 27 yrs old

Sounds like someone who prefers to keep distant.. someone who is looking for sex-only, no feels.