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I Want You To Kiss Me Like You Mean It


Write me something beautiful
without a single sheet of paper
or the use of a tedious pen.
I want the ink to spill
from your tongue, as your lips against mine
become the words,
and the fluidity of your hands creates the punctuation.

Our breath will craft the diction,
as our kisses slowly turn into paragraphs,
allowing the movement of our bodies
to create the chapters of this perfectly written novel."
JL
RayRay77 · 61-69, M
Each new chapter better than the preceding one.
The passion growing as each new paragraph is penned in such an intimate fashion.
A novel with a each chapter having a perfect ending
But a novel that is, at the same time, never ending
RayRay77 · 61-69, M
Thanks for the encouragement, I'll certainly give it some thought.
diablesse · 56-60, F
You should. I would happily read anything you write if it's anything like the above.
dystopianAntihero · 56-60, M
Sometimes writing's not about the destination, it's the journey.
Shutterbug · 56-60, M
A novel to be read over and over again, each time with a different interpretation, but it's meaning is never lost.
diablesse · 56-60, F
A novel to be written over and over again
Shutterbug · 56-60, M
yes
StormStrider · 46-50, M
Beautifully written and expressed..
diablesse · 56-60, F
it is. I came across the poem online with only the initials JL, not sure who wrote it.
That's one handsome man lol
pearllederman · 61-69, F
good luck with that, im still waiting for my first kiss , not sure why i never got one
diablesse · 56-60, F
It's high time you got yours. Find yourself a nice guy and ask for one.
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
What a beautiful novel. I'd read the pages of us over and over...
diablesse · 56-60, F
It's the kind of novel you never tire of reading, no matter how many times you do
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
❤️
Kinderheart · 31-35, F
The picture is so steamy haha

The poem is quite intense =)
diablesse · 56-60, F
They go well together
dystopianAntihero · 56-60, M
It should always be like that, otherwise why bother.
diablesse · 56-60, F
It should indeed.
SincereDevil · 51-55, M
What it is to kiss
Most people miss
Good one is a bliss
Then some are like piss
When you whisper a hiss
The vanilla seems amiss
diablesse · 56-60, F
😂😂😂
SincereDevil · 51-55, M
Seems you like it - yeah slightly cheesy
diablesse · 56-60, F
I like the silly side of it, it made me giggle.
SW-User
Definitely good enough to be read over and over and cover to cover
AlienZipper · 61-69, M
Hmmmmmmm..... 🤔
diablesse · 56-60, F
Pondering?
AlienZipper · 61-69, M
As per usual, Madame... ;-)
zorroo · 56-60, M
I love kissing.
diablesse · 56-60, F
It is one of life's great pleasures when done right.
zorroo · 56-60, M
@diablesse: unfortunately not many are good kisser.
SW-User

 
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