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I Want You To Kiss Me Like You Mean It

Write me something beautiful
without a single sheet of paper
or the use of a tedious pen.
I want the ink to spill
from your tongue, as your lips against mine
become the words,
and the fluidity of your hands creates the punctuation.

Our breath will craft the diction,
as our kisses slowly turn into paragraphs,
allowing the movement of our bodies
to create the chapters of this perfectly written novel."
JL

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RayRay77 · 61-69, M

Each new chapter better than the preceding one.
The passion growing as each new paragraph is penned in such an intimate fashion.
A novel with a each chapter having a perfect ending
But a novel that is, at the same time, never ending

diablesse · 56-60, F

This is beautifully poetic.
Thank you for adding so much beauty to the above poem.

RayRay77 · 61-69, M

You're welcome. It was just running through my head after reading the poem.

diablesse · 56-60, F

You're very talented. You should write more.

RayRay77 · 61-69, M

Thanks for the encouragement, I'll certainly give it some thought.

diablesse · 56-60, F

You should. I would happily read anything you write if it's anything like the above.

dystopianAntihero · 56-60, M

Sometimes writing's not about the destination, it's the journey.