Romantic
Only logged in members can reply and interact with the post.
Join SimilarWorlds for FREE »
MarthaTheMaid · 51-55, F
I love it...
@MarthaTheMaid

Uh!! Thank you Miss Martha.. 🤗🤗🌹

A fascinating love poem ... subtle yet complex ... intellectual yet feeling ... inclusive yet specific ... lost yet found ...

Nice!
@questionWeaver

Thank you my dear friend...

Your words are kind and encouraging.. 🤗🤗
GJOFJ3 · 61-69, M
This is beautiful
Poetry filled with love, heart and soul
Thanks for sharing
@GJOFJ3

Thank you for reading it and Im glad that you liked it..

🤗🙏
Wow...very nice.
@Soossie WHAT?! THE FIRST TIME?

No way...it is so...vivid.
You are also compact & concise.
But your choice of words is so...well-honed. Each word seems well-chosen & yet natural. It has the seeming effortlessness of natural expression, but the carefully crafted nature which belies a bit of thought.

Only truly great writers can make this look easy.

I think you are quite gifted. And I am pretty hard on people for misusing language (ok, mostly if they are being asses)...but I don't need to say this without meaning it, I don't tell everyone that their writing is amazing, incandescant, etc.

I am so honored to have read a well-written posting of true literature. 😊🤗🤗🤗
@SomeMichGuy

Oh my God!!

Im blushing in here.. truly honored..

I will always remember your kind words...

Thank you.. 🤗🤗🙏
@Soossie Well, you are quite welcome. 😊🤗🤗🤗
elafina · 36-40, F
It feels peaceful yet moving, like a soft wind. I loved it Soosie 🌬️
@elafina

Thank you Lady Elafina.. 🙏🤗
pearllederman · 61-69, F
thats a good poem , did you write it?
@pearllederman

Thank yoi sweet Pearl... yes, I wrote it and Im glad that you liked it... 🤗🤗💖🌹
Larksky · M
Never did it happen before.....

Happen to see beyond

The light that was never seen before

You see it now

You see it clearly now

You reach to it

You embrace it with all your might

But it's light

Can't hold on to it even if you try
@Larksky

This is very beautiful...
Larksky · M
@Soossie thank you.. but they are just random words
cuddles1266 · 70-79, M
A lovely poem. It makes my heart ache but also reminds me of my twin flame.
@cuddles1266

Thank you for reading … and I’m sorry that it made you sad… 🙏
Babaloo64 · 41-45, M
Soossie amazing poem from an elegant lady.
@Babaloo64

Thank you for reading and for the kind words dear Baba…
Babaloo64 · 41-45, M
@Soossie welcome friend
AmorFati · M
Beautiful and straight from the heart...
@AmorFati

Thank you for your kind words…
SW-User
❤️...Great post Soossie sweetheart.
@SW-User

Thank you my darling... 💖
Niloo · 46-50, F
Absolutely lovely❤️
@Niloo

Thank you Niloo Jaan.. 🥰🤗🌹
[c=4C0073]Thats just soo lovely 💜[/c]
@NiightOwl

Thank you for reading... 🙏🤗
SW-User
I’ve heard that if you look at your crush's left eye for one second, then their lips for one and a half to two seconds, then finally their right eye for one second — it's like casting a love spell.
😏
@SW-User

Say what?? Lol....
SW-User
Be good or I’ll put a spell on you 😏. @Soossie
Iwillwait · M
Well done.😳
@Iwillwait

Thank you... 🙏🤗
alan20 · M
The sadness of remembering things that might have been and should have been. W.B. Yeats wrote "Tread softly because you tread on my dreams". ❤️
@alan20

Aww!! Hugss ... I hope things are fine dear Alan... 🤗🤗
teachmetiger210503 · 36-40, M
May you find the person you are waiting for. Time will find him home to you, patience 🙏. you yearn in the most beautiful words.
@teachmetiger210503

Aww!! Thank you so much … 🙏🙏
Beautiful, and bittersweet, Soossie. 😔💛
A touching recollection.

_____________________________

[youtube=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S_E2EHVxNAE]
@Soossie My pleasure dear Soossie, god speed on your journey of the heart.

🤗🤗💛
@SethGreene531

Thank you... 🙏🤗🤗
@Soossie 🙏😌 🤗
Reaverwolf · M
Beautiful weaving of words that are perfect to show the feelings that are being expressed, tells a story in flashes of emotion
@Reaverwolf

I just saw this.... my apolofies for replying to your comment this late...

You are very kind.... thank you for taking the time to read this.... 🙏🙏
basicpoet33 · 70-79, M
very deep and meaningful. Doubly impressive considering that it is your first poem written in English.
@basicpoet33

Thank you so much … 🙏🙏
AllAboutLaffs · 70-79, M
Eloquent and genuine ... well done, Soossie ... 🥰
AllAboutLaffs · 70-79, M
@Soossie It was my second visit to your post, Soossie .... I had to read it again ... 🤗
@AllAboutLaffs

This means a lot.. Im.so happy that I wrote something that you like... 🤗🤗
AllAboutLaffs · 70-79, M
@Soossie I really like it ... 🤗🤗🥰
Mktonght · 61-69, M
Your ability to compose art in words is awesome
Thanks for sharing your heart so beautifully.
Mike
@Mktonght

Thank you for your kind words... 🙏
cd4259 · 61-69, M
The unrequited love of someone who is unavailable, it hurts but is still true undying love.
@cd4259

Nicely put … thank you ..
Ambroseguy80 · 56-60, M
A smile can hide a thousand other emotions. Especially when you have a beautiful one! Keep using it dear…. 😁
@Ambroseguy80

Such kind words... thank you dear Ambrose.. 🤗🤗
FUNBOY · M
@Gillian 🥰😍ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS1
You are very special! Such a lovely lady! I wish we could meet!
Love,
Funboy
@FUNBOY

Oh... ok!! I hope she sees this in here...
Peaches · F
They say there is someone we don't realize who is wondering what it would be like to hold you in their arms. 💞
@Peaches

Aww!! Beautiful... 🤗🤗🌹
Bklynbadboy12 · 31-35, M
I love your profile pic you have a million dollar smile
@Bklynbadboy12

Thank you for your kind words…
Bklynbadboy12 · 31-35, M
@Soossie Your so welcome
alan20 · M
Very beautiful. It feels lonely yet in a way triumphant in that love endures.
@alan20

Thank you dear Alan.... Im glad that you liked it... 🤗🤗
Uncfred · 61-69, M
From the heart, to the heart, where my wife waits for me, and it cannot come soon enough.
@Uncfred

I’m sorry to hear … true love knows patience and hope…
Virgo79 · 61-69, M
Sossie is one of a kind for sure🙂
Virgo79 · 61-69, M
@Soossie gotta read yours😟
Welcome🤗
@Virgo79

You are too kind dear Virgo.. 😘
Virgo79 · 61-69, M
@Soossie well you are a good gal🤷‍♂️😘
Docbus · 51-55, M
Wow. Words can be awesome. You are an excellent writer
@Docbus

Thank you for reading... 🙏🙏
AllAboutLaffs · 70-79, M
A lovely poem, Soossie .... thank you ...
@AllAboutLaffs

Thank you for reading my friend... 🤗🙏
AllAboutLaffs · 70-79, M
@Soossie 🤗
olderuncle944 · 70-79, M
very beautiful the picture tells it all
This comment is hidden. Show Comment
Whyme · 46-50, M
Luv the profile pic
@Whyme

Thank you.... you are too kind...
Whyme · 46-50, M
@Soossie if my kindness only matched your smile
@Whyme

Awww!! Thank you...... 🙏
Bklynbadboy12 · 31-35, M
That was beautiful did you write that
@Bklynbadboy12

Thank you.... yes, I did.. 🙏🙏
olderuncle944 · 70-79, M
Beautiful poem from a beautiful lady
@olderuncle944

Awww!! Thank you.... 🙏🙏
antonioioio · 70-79, M
Beautifully said
I love those words 🌹🤗
@antonioioio

Thank you my friend … 🤗🤗
Nice poem, from a wonderful person.
@checkoutanytime

Thank you kind Checkoutanytime... 🤗🤗
stephan055 · 56-60, M
lovely poem ,so true to life
@stephan055

Thank you so much... 🙏
Barefooter25 · 46-50, M
[youtube=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dUNJc22MAb8] Perfect song for this thread.
@Barefooter25

Love the song.... and yes... it matches the post very well... thank you my friend... 🤗🤗
PoeticPlay · 51-55, M
A very familiar place.
@PoeticPlay

I should think that everybody, in one way or another has experienced that.... 🙏
PoeticPlay · 51-55, M
@Soossie
*sigh*
Zzxxxx · 56-60, M
Beautiful poem 🌹
@Zzxxxx

Thank you my friend...🤗
OldBrit · 61-69, M
Beautiful words
@OldBrit

Thank you very much my OldBrit friend... 🤗🤗🙏
Bklynbadboy12 · 31-35, M
Your very talented
@Bklynbadboy12

Thank you my friend.... 🙏🙏
I love your style 😍
@mistermister

Thank you.... very kind of you to say.... 🙏
HeavenBesideYou · 56-60, F
Lovely poem sis! 💗
@HeavenBesideYou

Thank you sweet Heaven... ❤🌹
Great writing..
@Experienced33

Thank you dear Experienced.. 🤗🤗
@Soossie You're quite welcome, lovely Soossie
@Mindfulness

Thank you for reading..
@Soossie it's beautiful, thank you for writing. ❤
@Mindfulness

🙏🤗
Serkan · 61-69, M
@Serkan

Thank you dear Serkan.... 🙏🤗
@Iwillwait

Im so glad that you liked it... thank you for reading.. 🤗

 
Post Comment