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MarthaTheMaid · 56-60, F
I love it...
A fascinating love poem ... subtle yet complex ... intellectual yet feeling ... inclusive yet specific ... lost yet found ...
Nice!
Nice!
GJOFJ3 · 61-69, M
This is beautiful
Poetry filled with love, heart and soul
Thanks for sharing
Poetry filled with love, heart and soul
Thanks for sharing
SomeMichGuy · M
Wow...very nice.
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SomeMichGuy · M
@Soossie WHAT?! THE FIRST TIME?
No way...it is so...vivid.
You are also compact & concise.
But your choice of words is so...well-honed. Each word seems well-chosen & yet natural. It has the seeming effortlessness of natural expression, but the carefully crafted nature which belies a bit of thought.
Only truly great writers can make this look easy.
I think you are quite gifted. And I am pretty hard on people for misusing language (ok, mostly if they are being asses)...but I don't need to say this without meaning it, I don't tell everyone that their writing is amazing, incandescant, etc.
I am so honored to have read a well-written posting of true literature. 😊🤗🤗🤗
No way...it is so...vivid.
You are also compact & concise.
But your choice of words is so...well-honed. Each word seems well-chosen & yet natural. It has the seeming effortlessness of natural expression, but the carefully crafted nature which belies a bit of thought.
Only truly great writers can make this look easy.
I think you are quite gifted. And I am pretty hard on people for misusing language (ok, mostly if they are being asses)...but I don't need to say this without meaning it, I don't tell everyone that their writing is amazing, incandescant, etc.
I am so honored to have read a well-written posting of true literature. 😊🤗🤗🤗
@SomeMichGuy
Oh my God!!
Im blushing in here.. truly honored..
I will always remember your kind words...
Thank you.. 🤗🤗🙏
Oh my God!!
Im blushing in here.. truly honored..
I will always remember your kind words...
Thank you.. 🤗🤗🙏
SomeMichGuy · M
@Soossie Well, you are quite welcome. 😊🤗🤗🤗
being · 36-40, F
It feels peaceful yet moving, like a soft wind. I loved it Soosie 🌬️
pearllederman · 61-69, F
thats a good poem , did you write it?
Larksky · M
Never did it happen before.....
Happen to see beyond
The light that was never seen before
You see it now
You see it clearly now
You reach to it
You embrace it with all your might
But it's light
Can't hold on to it even if you try
Happen to see beyond
The light that was never seen before
You see it now
You see it clearly now
You reach to it
You embrace it with all your might
But it's light
Can't hold on to it even if you try
cuddles1266 · 70-79, M
A lovely poem. It makes my heart ache but also reminds me of my twin flame.
AmorFati · M
Beautiful and straight from the heart...
Babaloo6 · 41-45, M
Soossie amazing poem from an elegant lady.

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❤️...Great post Soossie sweetheart.
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Thank you my darling... 💖
Thank you my darling... 💖
Niloo · 46-50, F
Absolutely lovely❤️
Thats just soo lovely 💜
Iwillwait · M
Well done.😳

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I’ve heard that if you look at your crush's left eye for one second, then their lips for one and a half to two seconds, then finally their right eye for one second — it's like casting a love spell.
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alan20 · M
The sadness of remembering things that might have been and should have been. W.B. Yeats wrote "Tread softly because you tread on my dreams". ❤️
Reaverwolf · M
Beautiful weaving of words that are perfect to show the feelings that are being expressed, tells a story in flashes of emotion
@Reaverwolf
I just saw this.... my apolofies for replying to your comment this late...
You are very kind.... thank you for taking the time to read this.... 🙏🙏
I just saw this.... my apolofies for replying to your comment this late...
You are very kind.... thank you for taking the time to read this.... 🙏🙏
teachmetiger210503 · 36-40, M
May you find the person you are waiting for. Time will find him home to you, patience 🙏. you yearn in the most beautiful words.
Mktonght · 61-69, M
Your ability to compose art in words is awesome
Thanks for sharing your heart so beautifully.
Mike
Thanks for sharing your heart so beautifully.
Mike
SethGreene531 · M
Beautiful, and bittersweet, Soossie. 😔💛
A touching recollection.
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A touching recollection.
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Ambroseguy80 · 56-60, M
A smile can hide a thousand other emotions. Especially when you have a beautiful one! Keep using it dear…. 😁
basicpoet33 · 80-89, M
very deep and meaningful. Doubly impressive considering that it is your first poem written in English.
cd4259 · 61-69, M
The unrequited love of someone who is unavailable, it hurts but is still true undying love.
alan20 · M
Very beautiful. It feels lonely yet in a way triumphant in that love endures.
Uncfred · 61-69, M
From the heart, to the heart, where my wife waits for me, and it cannot come soon enough.
Docbus · 51-55, M
Wow. Words can be awesome. You are an excellent writer
Bklynbadboy12 · 31-35, M
I love your profile pic you have a million dollar smile
Bklynbadboy12 · 31-35, M
@Soossie Your so welcome
AllAboutLaffs · 80-89, M
Eloquent and genuine ... well done, Soossie ... 🥰
AllAboutLaffs · 80-89, M
@Soossie It was my second visit to your post, Soossie .... I had to read it again ... 🤗
AllAboutLaffs · 80-89, M
@Soossie I really like it ... 🤗🤗🥰
AllAboutLaffs · 80-89, M
A lovely poem, Soossie .... thank you ...
AllAboutLaffs · 80-89, M
@Soossie 🤗
olderuncle944 · 70-79, M
Beautiful poem from a beautiful lady
olderuncle944 · 70-79, M
very beautiful the picture tells it all
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Whyme · 46-50, M
Luv the profile pic
TallMtnMedic · M
Beautiful and heartbreaking.
Peaches · F
They say there is someone we don't realize who is wondering what it would be like to hold you in their arms. 💞


Bklynbadboy12 · 31-35, M
That was beautiful did you write that
PoeticPlay · 51-55, M
A very familiar place.
PoeticPlay · 51-55, M
@Soossie
*sigh*
*sigh*
checkoutanytime · 41-45, M
Nice poem, from a wonderful person.
stephan055 · 56-60, M
lovely poem ,so true to life
antonioioio · 70-79, M
Beautifully said
I love those words 🌹🤗
I love those words 🌹🤗
Barefooter25 · 46-50, M
[media=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dUNJc22MAb8] Perfect song for this thread.
@Barefooter25
Love the song.... and yes... it matches the post very well... thank you my friend... 🤗🤗
Love the song.... and yes... it matches the post very well... thank you my friend... 🤗🤗
Experienced33 · M
Great writing..
Experienced33 · M
@Soossie You're quite welcome, lovely Soossie
Wow! ❤
Serkan · 61-69, M
beautifull
HeavenBesideYou · 56-60, F
Lovely poem sis! 💗
Zzxxxx · 56-60, M
Beautiful poem 🌹
OldBrit · 61-69, M
Beautiful words

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Naturally.
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Bklynbadboy12 · 31-35, M
Your very talented
mistermister · M
I love your style 😍
Iwillwait · M
Love this.
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