What do you think about my poem???
Oh geez, Louise!
Why must I be
Why must I be musty
In the heat of the sun
I smell like a bum
Why must I be
Why must I be musty
In the heat of the sun
I smell like a bum
100+, C
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MyNameIsHurl · 46-50, F
TheLittleBunny · 100+, C
@MyNameIsHurl Thanks for the constructive criticism
MyNameIsHurl · 46-50, F
No problem