Unbalanced.

I stand, black and empty.
The touch ignites me.
We flare together.
We fly.
But she flies away.

I land, black and empty.
I find my way to us.
This time, I hold on tightly.
But again.
She flies away.

I watch from afar.
She flares with other souls.
I smile for her full, red heart.
And run to find my own.

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Mamapolo2016 · F

I read this, and then I came back to read it again. I don't do that for bad writing. It's moving.

RoboChloe · 26-30, F

@Mamapolo2016 Wow. Thank you. ♡

Mamapolo2016 · F

@RoboChloe Thank you for sharing.

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Majorlatency · M

I like this... These are your words?

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Majorlatency · M

@RoboChloe I completely understand that.. Almost deleted my question after writing it.. I respect your comments.. Keep what inspired you close to your heart... In time I would like to read more..

RoboChloe · 26-30, F

@Majorlatency This isn't my only work of this kind here on SW, but the rest was made when I was in such a dark, hopeless, warped place mentally that it doesn't make much sense and isn't very good at all, in my opinion.

I do plan to write more, hopefully interesting things soon.

Majorlatency · M

@RoboChloe I look forward to that. in the meantime I will peruse your other work and won't pass judgement.. Thanks..

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