What is the one thing that is wrong with this poem?

@mathsman Get your mind out of the gutter lol

@MikefromEP Whaaaat, it's about becoming a successful MAN. What about females? Wash your own mouth out.

@mathsman Are you testing this ?

@MikefromEP Testing what?
You asked the original question and I replied. It's a single gender poem. What about daughters?

@mathsman You got it right.. as wrong as it is

@MikefromEP But of course it's not really about gender. And there's nothing "wrong" with it.

@mathsman About ideals.. NOT gender

@MikefromEP So, what's the one thing wrong with it?

@mathsman The poem.. Nothing. ALLOWING a person to understand it... is another

@MikefromEP Who is doing the "ALLOWING"?

To walk amongst Kings And Queens... is my version of the poem

@MikefromEP Who is doing the ALLOWING?

@mathsman Catholic Church is bending over backwards I hear

@MikefromEP How and where did you hear that?

@mathsman They are thinking of closing the schools here

@MikefromEP Any chance you might answer my question ?