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Keep me in mind.. farewell

Crawl up to me now
Crawl up on your knees
Crawl up to the place where I dwell.

Climb in through my spine
Climb up through my mind
Climb up through the hole which I fell.

Step into my heart
Step into my soul
Step into my gateway of Hell.

Lurk in my dreams
Lurk in my shadows
Lurk deep in my head , I compel.

Feel my depression
Feel my obsession
Feel my compassion unveil .

Leave me in silence
Leave me in pieces
Leave me to those I befell.

Despise all l my thoughts
Despise all my sins
Despise all things I repel.

Keep me in mind
Keep me this time
Keep me forever

FrenchfriesF Best Comment
Now that鈥檚 poetry. Deeply beautiful 馃枻
melissa00151-55, F
@Frenchfries thank you that's a great compliment

Dark, evocative, yet tinged with sadness
melissa00151-55, F
@Ghostinthemachine a good way to describe it. Thanks
Filled with pain, struggle, and betrayal.
melissa00151-55, F
@Ontheroad hit the nail on the head.
Very well done I like the flow
melissa00151-55, F
@SW-User thank you very much.
Very deep I like it a lot
melissa00151-55, F
@SW-User thank you 馃槉
@melissa001 of course
Livingwell61-69, M
My heart hurts for you
melissa00151-55, F
@Livingwell thank you.
melissa00151-55, F
@SatyrService my poem? Yes it is.
Japrost41-45, M
melissa00151-55, F
@Japrost didn't like it? You won't hurt my feelings. I like to know what opinion people have.

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