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Gothic poetry...Keep Me In Mind.. Farewell

Crawl up to me now
Crawl up on your knees
Crawl up to the place where I dwell.

Climb in through my spine
Climb up through my mind
Climb up through the hole which I fell.

Step into my heart
Step into my soul
Step into my gateway of Hell.

Lurk in my dreams
Lurk in my shadows
Lurk deep in my head , I compel.

Feel my depression
Feel my obsession
Feel my compassion unveil .

Leave me in silence
Leave me in pieces
Leave me to those I befell.

Despise all l my thoughts
Despise all my sins
Despise all things I repel.

Keep me in mind
Keep me this time
Keep me forever

Farewell.
Elanor · F Best Comment
Now that’s poetry. Deeply beautiful 🖤
melissa001 · 51-55, F
@Elanor thank you that's a great compliment
😁

Dark, evocative, yet tinged with sadness
melissa001 · 51-55, F
@Ghostinthemachine a good way to describe it. Thanks
Ontheroad · M
Filled with pain, struggle, and betrayal.
melissa001 · 51-55, F
@Ontheroad hit the nail on the head.
Very well done I like the flow
melissa001 · 51-55, F
@mindlessdrifter thank you very much.
SW-User
Very deep I like it a lot
melissa001 · 51-55, F
@SW-User thank you 😊
SW-User
@melissa001 of course
Livingwell · 61-69, M
My heart hurts for you
melissa001 · 51-55, F
@Livingwell thank you.
melissa001 · 51-55, F
@SatyrService my poem? Yes it is.
Japrost · 41-45, M
melissa001 · 51-55, F
@Japrost didn't like it? You won't hurt my feelings. I like to know what opinion people have.

 
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