Does this interview request sound ok?

Hello Sara,

My name is______ and i am an aspiring health care professional.
I am a graduate of _______ where i received a bachelor's of public health.
I currently work in a hospital call-center but I am more interested in working face-to face and hands on with students, faculty, and staff.

I have recently applied for the ______ position in [department] and would like to schedule an interview with you.
I want to be respectful to my current employer, so is it possible for me to schedule an interview after 4:30 pm, any day of the week?

Thank you

My Name

Does it need more 'fluff'? I wanted it to be short and simple...

*** Also, should I attach my resume?

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HannahSky · F Best Comment

Leave out the "but". Just say this is where you work and are interested in direct service with...

Let her know you're available for an interview. But not when. You can schedule it if they call you.

iamnikki · 31-35, F

@HannahSky " I am available for interviewing at your earliest convenience?"

HannahSky · F

@iamnikki sounds good. You can work out the day and time with whoever calls you. They know people have to be respectful to their current employers.

iamnikki · 31-35, F

@HannahSky TY!

HannahSky · F

@iamnikki "but I am more" sounds like you don't like what you are doing now

HannahSky · F

@iamnikki thx for BA good luck!!

iamnikki · 31-35, F

@HannahSky I dont. Too late, its sent now

HannahSky · F

@iamnikki good enough then. 👍

iamnikki · 31-35, F

@HannahSky I ended up putting Currently, I work ...however, working face-to face and hands on with students... is more desirable.

HannahSky · F

@iamnikki perfect