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JETM319 · M
Could you squeeze in some variation of "I would be a good fit for company x"?
iamnikki · 31-35, F
@JETM319 how does " I am highly motivated to work at ____ hospital" sound?

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Thankful for this opportunity
iamnikki · 31-35, F
@SW-User that's my last sentence.

* no it wasn't, thank you, it is now😄
SW-User
I think @tenente gave a pretty good answer too @iamnikki
Cmstars · 22-25, F
I have a keen desire for the position.
Montanaman · M
I'm highly motivated for this particular job.👍
iamnikki · 31-35, F
@Montanaman " I am highly motivated to work at ____ hospital"?
Montanaman · M
@iamnikki exactly.
coffeedimplez · 26-30, F
I'm looking forward to working with you?
coffeedimplez · 26-30, F
Excited for the opportunity?
SW-User
Quite appealing
I look forward to the opportunity.........to.........
I look forward to the occasion to prove my potential.........
prospect to.;.........
prospective ..........
happenstance.........
all interchangeable but maybe lame...... I'm not sure.
Katfish · 41-45, F
I wouldnt hold back, I'd say I would LOVE to work there
GoldenSparrow · 31-35, F
Perhaps "greatly excited" or "intrigued" would work.
Steve42 · 56-60, M
Use the goofy.
tenente · 100+, M
"Dear Amanda,

Thank you so much for taking the time to speak with me yesterday. This job honestly feels like a perfect fit—my experience has well prepared me for [the responsibilities of the role], and I have [the skills she is looking for] to [accomplish what she is looking to accomplish]. I know I would be a valuable, creative, and enthusiastic member of your team, and I can already tell that we would work well together.

Thanks again for the awesome opportunity. I look forward to hearing from you soon, and hopefully joining your fantastic team. Until then, good luck with that TBR pile!

Best,
Kelsey"

Sauce:
https://www.fastcompany.com/3057431/heres-what-to-write-in-your-thank-you-note-after-a-job-interview
Ynotisay · M
@tenente I'd say there's a glaring mistake in that one. Do you know who says things like "honestly" or "truthfully" or "believe me?"
People who aren't telling the truth.

 
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