I would have the walls right up around my feelings after the initial rebuff but that apology would melt enough of them that I would certainly at least talk to the girl again about everything. I don't think you can do much more than what you have. Those feel like heartfelt words and very open and honest. It is now up to him and how he reacts when he reads your message. I think your message is is well written enough to give you hope but it is in his hands now!

Good luck! I hope it goes well for you!

I would interpret it as, maybe there’s a big difference In honesty, you might not know what you’re looking for and you need a better hold of how you communicate. I’d call it done to be honest. I’m about to be 34 don’t have time for games.

He's probably right when he concluded he's not the guy you're looking for. There's a reason why you told him no initially, and I think he heard it loud and clear.

I'd be leary but that is just my personality. Lol But no this seems like a good sincere apology and it is honest. I'd appreciate it.

I'd be a little upset, but it sounds sincere. Best of luck and hope things work out for ya.

I don't understand how you communicate with your dog. Lol.. Sorry..

Looks genuine but too much excited. Just your words, "unless you want me to" makes me think you don't yet have faith on him.

Yeah, seems genuine. Hope things work out for you

I think it is VERY good.
I wish you all the very best

Thanks for all of your feedback. I feel like I really messed this up and I really am hoping he gives me a second shot.

sounds sincere and genuine. i would give you another shot.

Seems good to me. I'd probably go for it if I was that guy