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Disguised · 56-60, M
I will take your hand and be a guide.
Lets give heatless no place to hide.
Lets shout out to one and all.
True love has finally made a call.
We'll walk loves paths hand in hand.
Compassion flowing when we stand.
To all about who will look on.
Seeing two hearts that belong.
Rx
Lets give heatless no place to hide.
Lets shout out to one and all.
True love has finally made a call.
We'll walk loves paths hand in hand.
Compassion flowing when we stand.
To all about who will look on.
Seeing two hearts that belong.
Rx
PoetryNEmotion · F
@Peaches And he does this spontaneously!
Grateful4you · M
@Disguised I was just going to say, to seek out the poet who keeps the windows of clarity and creativity wide open. The one who knows the value of a single blade of grass.
Disguised · 56-60, M
@PoetryNEmotion
You know how i like to write... in the moment... very little editing.. write a line then move to next... no point editing what was just written... if it felt right to write 5 seconds ago.. then it was the best response to my emotions at that precise time.... to go back and edit would be over writing my emotions. I write to escape... i write my best when my mind is in its darkest place... usually im very sad or unhappy.. You are right about spontaneity the poem above probably took less than 5 mins.. hence the spelling mistake.. i am a bit dyslexic so i often miss the mistakes... usually the only editing i do.. thank you for your continued support...
You know how i like to write... in the moment... very little editing.. write a line then move to next... no point editing what was just written... if it felt right to write 5 seconds ago.. then it was the best response to my emotions at that precise time.... to go back and edit would be over writing my emotions. I write to escape... i write my best when my mind is in its darkest place... usually im very sad or unhappy.. You are right about spontaneity the poem above probably took less than 5 mins.. hence the spelling mistake.. i am a bit dyslexic so i often miss the mistakes... usually the only editing i do.. thank you for your continued support...
Disguised · 56-60, M
@Grateful4you
A blade of grass can be sharp blade.
Many knives across wide glade.
Just waiting to cut and tear.
To all who aren't full aware.
A blade of grass can be sharp blade.
Many knives across wide glade.
Just waiting to cut and tear.
To all who aren't full aware.