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A gentle reminder

Remind me what it’s like
To be lost in train of thoughts
Then to be found by silent misery
Where our weeps are often
mistaken as raindrops,
Our feelings falsely
Accused of rage
Our laughter comes off
As childish.. mindless
Remind me
For my youth’s
Already tarnished
Bland
Gray
Numb
Empty

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This piece is heavily influenced by the grief of losing ones memory of what childhood feels like. Its reminder sometimes spark a little hope throughout ones transition to adulthood.

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Yourbeau · M
Aww lovely 😊 Always enjoy your writing style 🙌🏻

Your words capture such deep emotion. It’s haunting yet also beautiful how you express the contrast between the weight of lost memories and the glimmers of hope that come with growing up.
Remembering childhood, even through the lens of pain, can sometimes spark those little flickers of hope that guide us forward.🤗
AngelUnforgiven · 51-55, F
I love this. I have huge gaps in my memory from childhood because I blocked it out. However, I don't grieve it because I would rather not remember.
JackDaniels · 46-50, M
Very nice poem. Enjoyed it.
stayfickle · 26-30, FNew
@JackDaniels thank you very much!
JackDaniels · 46-50, M
@stayfickle you are welcome.
Ferric67 · M
I do like this poem
stayfickle · 26-30, FNew
@Ferric67 thank you for taking your time to read it!!!
Remind me to remind you later

 
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