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I Want People to Share Their Poetry

The Cross

Shattered heart of broken glass,
I drove through flowing tears.
To find a quiet darkened place.
To silence the loudest years.

Fuel of fire and resolute mind,
I found a grove of trees.
A broken man alone and dark.
In tears and on his knees.

The fog that night filled the low,
Clouding a broken soul.
The pain that soon would leave my heart,
Tonight on a quiet knoll.

I cleared my mind with surprising calm,
I smiled and held my breath.
Expecting hence to meet the dark.
That thus would mark my death.


Pressure close, my last glance up,
I saw a blinding light.
That stole the dark with golden love.
And turned away the night.

Rapture here upon this Earth,
I would never have thought could be.
The purest form of loving light.
Reserved for only me.

Thus my life began that eve,
Among the old oak trees.
The night a broken selfish man.
Rose up from soggy knees.

Patrick
SW-User
So beautiful, Patrick. I can relate; I experienced the dark night of the soul, too. It's so so dark, and yet it's a beautiful experience. Thank you for sharing.🙂
👍 Stay healthy and keep posting, Pilot.
🤔 Wondering about that "surprising calm" that made "a broken ... up"
@Texaspilot: What helped you in the transformations? Who would you give credit to?
Texaspilot · 51-55, M
God
@Texaspilot: 🤗👍
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
Nicely done. I don't normally like rhyming poetry, but this is profound. I'm glad you had that experience, that you found that peace and can now share your words.
Yes, he has done a commendable work by giving words to his experience. I simply Bow*
HappyHeart · 56-60, F
It's beautiful, simply beautiful. You have intrigued me to keep reading your posts. Thank you.
The atonement? This is beautiful. 😢
Texaspilot · 51-55, M
No. A true life experience for me.
Texaspilot · 51-55, M
Thank you. I really appreciate the kind words.
Magenta · F
This is gorgeous. Oh so evocative. 💙💜

 
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