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The Cross

Shattered heart of broken glass,
I drove through flowing tears.
To find a quiet darkened place.
To silence the loudest years.

Fuel of fire and resolute mind,
I found a grove of trees.
A broken man alone and dark.
In tears and on his knees.

The fog that night filled the low,
Clouding a broken soul.
The pain that soon would leave my heart,
Tonight on a quiet knoll.

I cleared my mind with surprising calm,
I smiled and held my breath.
Expecting hence to meet the dark.
That thus would mark my death.


Pressure close, my last glance up,
I saw a blinding light.
That stole the dark with golden love.
And turned away the night.

Rapture here upon this Earth,
I would never have thought could be.
The purest form of loving light.
Reserved for only me.

Thus my life began that eve,
Among the old oak trees.
The night a broken selfish man.
Rose up from soggy knees.

Patrick
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馃憤 Stay healthy and keep posting, Pilot.
馃 Wondering about that "surprising calm" that made "a broken ... up"
Texaspilot51-55, M
The surprising calm was being at the end....done.... the calm was dangerous
@Texaspilot: Dangerous as in? I truly would like to know.
Texaspilot51-55, M
@Silentspectator: as in....I was calm and clear headed about wanting to die
@Texaspilot: I could sense and feel. Please say more.
Texaspilot51-55, M
What would you like to know?
@Texaspilot: That that calm still continues?
Texaspilot51-55, M
No. A different kind of calm now. The calm referred to in the poem was me giving up and falsely believing that my life was not worth living. Fueled by negative energy.

The calm I feel now, years later, is fro living a life filled with joy and wonderment at all of the beautiful moments... fueled by light.
@Texaspilot: What helped you in the transformations? Who would you give credit to?
Texaspilot51-55, M
God
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