Undress my Mind

Undress my mind

Disrobing layers of consciousness, memories, dreams

See me not with your eyes
but with your soul

Cradle my intricacies in your palm
My hopes, desires, and fears

Guide me to the freedom which can only be attained by fully being known

~Dada~

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helenS · 36-40, F

That poem is quite interesting. 🌷

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helenS · 36-40, F

@masterofyou Maybe it was Paul's intention to write something with lovers of beautiful female legs in mind? - and John may have said "No no let's make it more acceptable to a broader audience!" 🤭

masterofyou · 70-79, M

@helenS Perhaps and i really didn't know that there was another set of lyrics before they released that version. I learned something today...

helenS · 36-40, F

@masterofyou Oh I think that's not so unusual – a composer starts with a chord progression, and then he/she uses non-sensical lyrics to construct a melody over the chords. The "real" lyrics are made at a later stage of the production process. The final step is the arrangement, which, in the case of Yesterday, was done by George Martin, as far as I know.

Mia123 · 41-45, F

Playing the strings in a rhythm make a melodious music..
So is with soul.. So is with body..

masterofyou · 70-79, M

@Mia123 Thank you Mia...

Whendidyouknow · F

I find the poem interesting because we relate to it whether we want to or not, we never attain that level of freedom by being truly known by anyone, and instead of “undress” my mind, cloak mine in layers upon layers of what I may learn

masterofyou · 70-79, M

@Whendidyouknow Yes the poem is about someone here that came into my life and made a wonderful difference in how we relate with each other...😊

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