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In Walmart parking lot. North Carolina

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Amylynne26-30, F
must be a tow company
DeluxedEdition26-30, F
@Amylynne got to be the tag says tow
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Amylynne26-30, F
@DeluxedEdition there is a boat mover up my way called the happy hooker
DeluxedEdition26-30, F
@Amylynne i see stuff like this all the time. but i'm from florida so they're being serious 馃槶
Amylynne26-30, F
@DeluxedEdition oh Florida.. poor fFloriad iguana power outages,, giant seniority centers
gators in the pool a fiend in the staehouse
Slade56-60, M
@Amylynne soon to be in the White House twat
Amylynne26-30, F
@Slade[quote] in the white house twat[/quote]
so you think he is hot for Mrs Biden???
Slade56-60, M
@Amylynne once again in English
Amylynne26-30, F
@Slade you said
[quote] White House twat[/quote]
so I asked if you thought he had an interest in Mrs Biden, the resident twat at the white house
now Mr "use proper English." if you had been calling ME a twat you should have put a comma between house and twat.
English grade? d-
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PatKirbyM
@Amylynne
Hmmm. As you know, I'm a grammar Nazi but I also mean this in jest. When quoting someone directly, quotation marks should be used. Quote bubbles are okay though, but a colon really should have been placed after the word "said" to preface the quote bubble. Likewise, an elipsis should have been used before the word "so" to ensure continuity.

Also, "Mrs" needed a period, "White House" is a proper noun and should be capitalized, "Mr" needed a period, and you forgot to capitalize the last "if" as it began a sentence.

Finally, it's always good to break up sentences into groups of separate ideas for emphasis and readability as well as to avoid runoffs.

There. So now that I've made an absolute ass hat of myself, just to prove I'm not a total jerk, can you spot the mistakes I deliberately made in this awful mess?
Amylynne26-30, F
@PatKirby tomorrow when the wine wears off.
shouldn't call me a twat tho I am a nice person..
PatKirbyM
@Amylynne
Ok. I think he meant Kamala Harris taking over the White House, not you.