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Amylynne 路 26-30, F
must be a tow company
DeluxedEdition 路 26-30, F
@Amylynne got to be the tag says tow
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Amylynne 路 26-30, F
@DeluxedEdition there is a boat mover up my way called the happy hooker
DeluxedEdition 路 26-30, F
@Amylynne i see stuff like this all the time. but i'm from florida so they're being serious 馃槶
Amylynne 路 26-30, F
@DeluxedEdition oh Florida.. poor fFloriad iguana power outages,, giant seniority centers
gators in the pool a fiend in the staehouse
gators in the pool a fiend in the staehouse
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PatKirby 路 M
@Amylynne
Hmmm. As you know, I'm a grammar Nazi but I also mean this in jest. When quoting someone directly, quotation marks should be used. Quote bubbles are okay though, but a colon really should have been placed after the word "said" to preface the quote bubble. Likewise, an elipsis should have been used before the word "so" to ensure continuity.
Also, "Mrs" needed a period, "White House" is a proper noun and should be capitalized, "Mr" needed a period, and you forgot to capitalize the last "if" as it began a sentence.
Finally, it's always good to break up sentences into groups of separate ideas for emphasis and readability as well as to avoid runoffs.
There. So now that I've made an absolute ass hat of myself, just to prove I'm not a total jerk, can you spot the mistakes I deliberately made in this awful mess?
Hmmm. As you know, I'm a grammar Nazi but I also mean this in jest. When quoting someone directly, quotation marks should be used. Quote bubbles are okay though, but a colon really should have been placed after the word "said" to preface the quote bubble. Likewise, an elipsis should have been used before the word "so" to ensure continuity.
Also, "Mrs" needed a period, "White House" is a proper noun and should be capitalized, "Mr" needed a period, and you forgot to capitalize the last "if" as it began a sentence.
Finally, it's always good to break up sentences into groups of separate ideas for emphasis and readability as well as to avoid runoffs.
There. So now that I've made an absolute ass hat of myself, just to prove I'm not a total jerk, can you spot the mistakes I deliberately made in this awful mess?