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Amylynne · 26-30, F
must be a tow company
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PatKirby · M
@Amylynne
Hmmm. As you know, I'm a grammar Nazi but I also mean this in jest. When quoting someone directly, quotation marks should be used. Quote bubbles are okay though, but a colon really should have been placed after the word "said" to preface the quote bubble. Likewise, an elipsis should have been used before the word "so" to ensure continuity.
Also, "Mrs" needed a period, "White House" is a proper noun and should be capitalized, "Mr" needed a period, and you forgot to capitalize the last "if" as it began a sentence.
Finally, it's always good to break up sentences into groups of separate ideas for emphasis and readability as well as to avoid runoffs.
There. So now that I've made an absolute ass hat of myself, just to prove I'm not a total jerk, can you spot the mistakes I deliberately made in this awful mess?
Hmmm. As you know, I'm a grammar Nazi but I also mean this in jest. When quoting someone directly, quotation marks should be used. Quote bubbles are okay though, but a colon really should have been placed after the word "said" to preface the quote bubble. Likewise, an elipsis should have been used before the word "so" to ensure continuity.
Also, "Mrs" needed a period, "White House" is a proper noun and should be capitalized, "Mr" needed a period, and you forgot to capitalize the last "if" as it began a sentence.
Finally, it's always good to break up sentences into groups of separate ideas for emphasis and readability as well as to avoid runoffs.
There. So now that I've made an absolute ass hat of myself, just to prove I'm not a total jerk, can you spot the mistakes I deliberately made in this awful mess?
DrWatson · 70-79, M
There are lots of tee shirts that say that, referring to fishing.
And then there are the latch-hook rug crafters.
But if this truck owner means "hooker" in the way we first think when we see the word, I imagine the car in the next space having a bumper sticker, "I don't have to pay for it!"
And then there are the latch-hook rug crafters.
But if this truck owner means "hooker" in the way we first think when we see the word, I imagine the car in the next space having a bumper sticker, "I don't have to pay for it!"
Thinkerbell · 41-45, F
This gives cargo beds a new meaning... 😳
Slade · 56-60, M
@Thinkerbell Good Q. Or at least have a trestle to move under😆
Thinkerbell · 41-45, F
Slade · 56-60, M
@Thinkerbell A garage would do in a pinch. Just boot out the ner do well family member living there😈
BizSuitStacy · M
Pro bass angler?
Quimliqer · 70-79, M
Wow, must be referring to a local towing company??
DiegoWolfe · 36-40
What thats just a fisherman
That’s my people. 😂
Is that yours?
wildbill83 · 36-40, M
🤔
candycane · 31-35, F
Is it by creedmore