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Me and lostPoet made a song

Kind of proud of this one even tho I am kind of sloppy on it.
LostPoet wrote this poem and I really could connect to it.
He let me do some editing and make a song from it.
So do something out of the ordinary and give it a listen.
Thanks.
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ChiefRunsWith40oz22-25
Aw shit I saw him post that poem the other day but I didn't realize that was the same guy.
You did awesome on the song that's hella sick 馃 it has a Metallica vibe to it
ChiefRunsWith40oz22-25
@LostNForgotten a lot of poetry is pretty much just complaining. That doesn't take away from the art behind it though. Coming from a fellow writer, I think of it as taking your feelings & creating something you can be proud of
LostNForgotten31-35, M
@ChiefRunsWith40oz Yeah and like for me anything that creeps into my brain I write down as quick as I can just so I have something to play around with and I hate 90%of everything I write but every once in a while it is something halfway decent.
ChiefRunsWith40oz22-25
@LostNForgotten that's actually super relatable 馃槀
Dainbramadge51-55, M
"The Misery of You"

You taught me to hate my voice
My clothes and my grace
You taught me to never look
people in the face

You taught me that no one cares
Let alone myself
You taught me how to turn
heaven into hell

You have shown me misery
not just today
You cut me to the bone
with what you don't say

You pick up the pieces
and lock them away
You plant your seed in my brain
and there it stays

You taught me to expect nothing
and give myself for free
You taught me how to accept life's
little miseries

You taught me that something's wrong
in a state of decay
You taught me that I'm not strong
and will never be

You have shown me misery
not just today
You cut me to the bone
with what you don't say

You pick up the pieces
and locked them away
You plant your seed in my brain
and there it stays
Angel77736-40, F
@Dainbramadge what a beautiful poem
Dainbramadge51-55, M
@Angel777 He is good isn't he. This is mostly verbatim what he wrote. I only wrote the chorus and composed the music.
dannyppaul56-60, M
Straight up Metallica wut
Dainbramadge51-55, M
@dannyppaul got to work on my mix yet.:-)
Leggs46-50, F
Not really my taste of music so much but it doesn't sound too bad. The mixing could be cleaned up a bit but this has potential for sure.
Dainbramadge51-55, M
@Leggs In that case I have a bunch of demo version of songs.
Funny story about this one.
I recorded a version of it earlier.
This is taken from a poem by LostPoet. I think it says that already but ....
I normally just screw around and record what ever pops into my head. It's fun that way and I can see what kind of sound I can make.
But after hearing the first version I got to thinking I should have put more time into it because the lyrics really hit home with me. They really are very good.
So this version is a total re-write from the first.
I actually planed this all out.
Well now. That was a bit more than I meant to share. :-)
PeachesF
@Dainbramadge I think you did a great job. 猸
Dainbramadge51-55, M
@Peaches thank you very much. :-)
Angel77736-40, F
I would have liked to see the lyrics as subtitles. How if i send you my poems and we together come up with a song ?
Dainbramadge51-55, M
@Angel777 HA ha ha ha!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well you have lucked out. I enjoy many genres of music. :-)
Angel77736-40, F
@Dainbramadge I m a Chester see fan and someday i would like to have my poems made into songs like that

[media=https://youtu.be/5hPfL4zBY-c]
Dainbramadge51-55, M
@Angel777 Wow. That's pretty cool.
Great topic and the sound is amazing.
I don't do much piano stuff. Well much might have been a stretch too. LOL
I am sure we can come up with something.
PeachesF
[i][b][c=BF0000]Love it鈾ワ笍馃幎馃幐馃槉[/c][/b][/i]
Dainbramadge51-55, M
@Peaches thank you peaches. :-)
Eddiesolds56-60, M
@Dainbramadge I love that lead guitar who ever is playing it..
Eddiesolds56-60, M
@Dainbramadge You have alot of talent.Get on those drums already! Lmfao
Dainbramadge51-55, M
@Eddiesolds if I did the drumline myself I would have to buy a whole bunch of more microphones. LOL
But seriously that is the next step.
Thanks again man.
Eddiesolds56-60, M
@Dainbramadge lol! Thats funny.
Eddiesolds56-60, M
This is good! Right on you two
Dainbramadge51-55, M
@Eddiesolds thank you. It should get better in a little bit when I have more experience with the mixing program.

 
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