Me and lostPoet made a song

Kind of proud of this one even tho I am kind of sloppy on it.
LostPoet wrote this poem and I really could connect to it.
He let me do some editing and make a song from it.
So do something out of the ordinary and give it a listen.
Thanks.
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Dainbramadge · 56-60, M

"The Misery of You"

You taught me to hate my voice
My clothes and my grace
You taught me to never look
people in the face

You taught me that no one cares
Let alone myself
You taught me how to turn
heaven into hell

You have shown me misery
not just today
You cut me to the bone
with what you don't say

You pick up the pieces
and lock them away
You plant your seed in my brain
and there it stays

You taught me to expect nothing
and give myself for free
You taught me how to accept life's
little miseries

You taught me that something's wrong
in a state of decay
You taught me that I'm not strong
and will never be

You have shown me misery
not just today
You cut me to the bone
with what you don't say

You pick up the pieces
and locked them away
You plant your seed in my brain
and there it stays

SW-User

@Dainbramadge what a beautiful poem

Dainbramadge · 56-60, M

@SW-User He is good isn't he. This is mostly verbatim what he wrote. I only wrote the chorus and composed the music.