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Music May Have Killed Me

I was blind to everything mean
'Cept how she made me feel;
When I was sentenced to the guillotine
-I waived all appeals.

I remarked to the executioner
When I was led there, unafraid:
Don't sharpen it too much, for her
Commenting on his blade.

Where did I go wrong?
-I keep coming up empty...
-Was it singing all those Country songs
-When I knew she hated Country?

Now I feel like Merle Haggard
Singing: 'Sing Me Back Home'
And now everything that's mattered
Will have to go on alone.

The blade glistens in the sun
And the crowd gathers there
And I hear a voice, a lonely one,
Singing:' She Thinks I Still Care'
ProfessorPlum77 · 70-79, MVIP
Did you write that?
ProfessorPlum77 · 70-79, MVIP
@atlantic59 Two points:
One: I am trying to get the image from "dancing naked in the yard" out of my mind.
Two: Second stanza, third line... Where you write "Don't sharpen it too much, for her..." I thought YOU are the one to be executed, but that comment makes me wonder if your girlfriend is the victim.


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atlantic59 · 61-69, M
@ProfessorPlum77 what I meant was, she might want it a little dull to cause me more pain.
atlantic59 · 61-69, M
sorry for the nudity in the fields.

 
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