(i write)I Want People to Share Their Poetry [I Want People to Share Their Poetry]

My promise to you

I love you more dear
This is clear
I love you more
than my childhood fear

I love you more - than
the first cold beer
As the sun rises
And I see the trees
And feel the grass grow
And my mind and body grows too

I love you more - than
The sound of rain
As it whips my window panes
And the feeling I get
While in my study

I love you more - than
These scars, callused hands
Sweat dried skin
That makes me a man

I love you more - than
Those childish daydreams
When the women
Used to come to me

I love you more
yes this is true
I love you more dear
than my solitude

I love you more than
There art stars in the sky
I love you more
than me, myself, and I

And I'll keep on
Loving you
More and more
'till the day I die.

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Lostpoet · M

Corny, I know, but I wrote
It like ten years ago, so yeah.

SStarfish ·

@Lostpoet so do you then?

Lostpoet · M

@SStarfish ? Nah, the girl I wrote that for didn't work out. If that's what you're asking.

SStarfish ·

@Lostpoet thats what i was asking 😄

Lostpoet · M

@SStarfish lol. I'm glad you can laugh at other people's blue balls. Haha

SStarfish ·

@Lostpoet ive had practice 😄😄😄🙂

Anyway nice poem but basically a meaningless pack of lies

Unless you still love her despite the fact that she left you 😄🙂

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Lostpoet · M

@SStarfish I never said she left me?
She did, and I still do, but it is rude to assume. ☺

SStarfish ·

@Lostpoet look dude.. If you loved her you wouldn't have left her.. So it was a reasonable assumption 😊

Sorry for your loss?

Lostpoet · M

@SStarfish I was just joking
around I new you didn't mean anything by it. ✌😃

SStarfish ·

@Lostpoet ok yeah i meant no offense if thats what you mean 😊 I gtg walk my pets they are silently nagging me with their carpet draping poutyness 😆😆

Lostpoet · M

Haha. OK, I know how that is. :)

SStarfish ·

@Lostpoet lol i had to carry the lil one home.. Spoiled bumpkin 😄😄

Lostpoet · M

@SStarfish lol. What kind of dogs do you have?

SStarfish ·

the big one is an unknown mix and the lil one is allegedly a yorkey

Lostpoet · M

@SStarfish ahhh, cute pups.🙂

Carla1951 · 70-79, F

@SStarfish I have a Chihuahua pug mix, and a long haired blue eyed white Persian (that was a find Persian, who was a find. That my other half is allergic to his fur. This isn't gonna go far. I love my cat he knows he's mine alone. But B is allergic to Cat fur. Help me save my Cat please