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(i write)I Want People to Share Their Poetry [I Want People to Share Their Poetry]

My promise to you

I love you more dear
This is clear
I love you more
than my childhood fear

I love you more - than
the first cold beer
As the sun rises
And I see the trees
And feel the grass grow
And my mind and body grows too

I love you more - than
The sound of rain
As it whips my window panes
And the feeling I get
While in my study

I love you more - than
These scars, callused hands
Sweat dried skin
That makes me a man

I love you more - than
Those childish daydreams
When the women
Used to come to me

I love you more
yes this is true
I love you more dear
than my solitude

I love you more than
There art stars in the sky
I love you more
than me, myself, and I

And I'll keep on
Loving you
More and more
'till the day I die.

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Lilnonames · F Best Comment

Lilnonames

Sometimes i want to be free
Soar up in the clouds like a bird
But sooner or later i must land

Other times i want to b a shark
In the sea.swim forever
But one day i will b beached in the sand

Or i could live in the jungle
Like the king of beasts
But eventully ill b the feast

So ill just stay lil ole me
And live my life the way i choose it to be

SW-User

Maybe you should have written this about a dog instead of a person. Smh

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Dewkissedrose · 46-50, F

Someone is very lucky

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Lostpoet · M

@Dewkissedrose I love dogs, what kind?

Dewkissedrose · 46-50, F

@Lostpoet Shih Tzu

Lostpoet · M

@Dewkissedrose Cute pups

mondayschild2 · F

I have one love like this a 15 year old pug. He takes every step I take. He forgives me when I have to give him medicine. I will love him till the day I die.

SweetMae · 70-79, F

I think your expressed your emotions clearly.

JohannaJoyLinn · 26-30, F

This is ❤️

Lostpoet · M

@JohannaJoyLinn 😁TY and your poems are great

JohannaJoyLinn · 26-30, F

I'm not actually a poet, this is my first time writing but thank you. ❤️@Lostpoet

TexChik · F

Hmmm. I'm pretty sure this is fiction. Right?

Deesa123 · F

Did you write this yourself?

If you did you have a natural flair with words it's beautiful.

Lostpoet · M

@Deesa123 Yes, and thank you. 😁

BexEyes · 46-50, F

“...more than the first cold beer...” mmmmm, I understand that kind of love!😍

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BexEyes · 46-50, F

We can dress you up in a sexy suit!@SW-User

Lostpoet · M

Corny, I know, but I wrote
It like ten years ago, so yeah.

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SStarfish ·

the big one is an unknown mix and the lil one is allegedly a yorkey

Lostpoet · M

@SStarfish ahhh, cute pups.🙂

Carla1951 · 70-79, F

@SStarfish I have a Chihuahua pug mix, and a long haired blue eyed white Persian (that was a find Persian, who was a find. That my other half is allergic to his fur. This isn't gonna go far. I love my cat he knows he's mine alone. But B is allergic to Cat fur. Help me save my Cat please

LadyJ · F

WOW!! This is breath taking
Your really good with words poet

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Lostpoet · M

@SW-User I do

LadyJ · F

@SW-User hang on just saw your message about telling lostpoet you were just making a statement I was only commenting on his poetry like others have are you his security or something?? stay away from comments and out my business ffs

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SW-User

That's really good 👌🏽

Elevatorpitches · F

awesome!!😊

Lostpoet · M

@Elevatorpitches TY😁

Vivaci

This is so beautiful!

Peaches · F

This is great!☺️But I just don't know if I'll ever love him more than my beer!😄🍻

Lostpoet · M

@Peaches Lol. I miss beer. 😞

Peaches · F

@Lostpoet I don't drink as much of it as I used to. 🙂

Cmstars · 22-25, F

Its honest, vivid, and really puts the reader in your experience. Well penned!

Lostpoet · M

@Cmstars TY. Lol. You don't have to like one of mine because I like yours. But that's sweet of you, Ty.

Cmstars · 22-25, F

@Lostpoet lol I didn't. I just had never seen your poetry so I've been reading it. I'm new on here.

SW-User

Your writing always have meaning & Thoughts Like related To real things.
Keep writing 😊

Lostpoet · M

@SW-User Thank so much for saying nice things it really does make me feel good.🤗💜

SW-User

@Lostpoet No need To Because Your writing is Great It must be what inspires you 😊

OceanRoses · F

Beautifully penned, you are still young :) lucky the one you❤

Lostpoet · M

@OceanRoses Thank you. I would trade what little youth I have left to be with a sweet loving soul.

SW-User

Time doesn´t change words or meanings...it only changes us. That was beautifully written.

Velvety · F

So touching...thanks for sharing...🤗

Lostpoet · M

@Velvety Thank you.☺

Kcar26 · 36-40, F

That’s beautiful!

Lostpoet · M

@Kcar26 Thank you! :)

Anotherfinemessy

It is pretty corny 🤷🏻‍♀️

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turbineman40 · 80-89, M

Well stated! Thanks for sharing

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turbineman40 · 80-89, M

@Lostpoet you have talents. Keep writing

Lostpoet · M

@turbineman40 that's nice of you to say, thanks man.

turbineman40 · 80-89, M

@Lostpoet speaking the truth is always good for everyone

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