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Embracing winter


Drifting...

into the still placid of winter
The absence of color,
stains me with it’s melancholic comfort

Alone in this warm breath sigh,
that floats like cool fog
against a soot sky

Dawns soft laced caress
spills across the hills
I give my spirit intimately into it.

A reticent sun covered
It's intense golden heat hidden,
like a discreet lovers secret

Beyond, the north lies vast,
of snow, bone-white elegy
My restlessness held in the peace of solitude

I adore what is simple, and here
Where otherwise anechoic,
the slow creak of branches and the flight of birds
sing for me..
CCMorgan · 51-55, M
I've been trying to write again... not having much luck yet. You certainly surpassed me! This is lovely, and the way I wish to write... beautiful words, all linked by you in your clever way... I hope you don't mind:

Against a soot sky
Winter's bone-white elegy
My restlessness held


Your words inspire! 💜☮🤗
Magenta · F
@CCMorgan Aw I feel you! This didn't come easy, I struggled, ugh. I've been getting inspiration elsewhere.

I adore it! You know how I like haiku's and you are one of the few that knows how to create them. 😍🤗
meggie · F
Wonderful. I love it
Magenta · F
@meggie Glad you enjoyed.🩷
Magenta · F
Pfuzylogic · M
@Magenta
I have a level of work to reach !
edit: You structured that into a haiku!
As subtlety beautiful as windless winter landscape, sun sparkling upon a pristine Crystalline snow strewn path. ❄

Such a delight to read your enlightened prose.
You are truly a gift and an inspiration to us all. ❤
Magenta · F
@Onestarlitnight Aaww thanks much. And I loved your words.
ReneeT · 61-69, F
Wintertime does bring a sense of solitude. Like the world is sleeping and waiting for the spring sun to awaken. It's beautifully written, Magenta
Magenta · F
@ReneeT Mmhm. I've missed taking a walk in the fresh pristine snow this year, we don't have any. There is something so special about it.❄
Danke.
Gorgeous. Beautifully written and the visual just sets it off. 🤍
Magenta · F
@AnnabelleLeigh Thank you Annabelle. 🩵
@Magenta Always welcome.
Dino11 · M
Your description is spot on, something new and pure about a new snowfall.
Magenta · F
@Dino11 Mmmhm...
Harmonium1923 · 51-55, M
“The absence of color” ’is a nice phrase for a snowy scene.
Magenta · F
@Harmonium1923 Grey can be soothing.
I don't like it, give me spring any time,
Magenta · F
@jackrabbit10 Can't have one without the other. 🌨🌱🌻
Besides, it's poetry!
I am 💯 FULLY embraced in winter, TYVM. 🤭
Magenta · F
@SmileOnYourBrother *sticks out tongue*
Magenta · F
You and your saw, hmm? ;-) @SmileOnYourBrother
My writing/ photo is the most snow we've had this winter.
Jackhoff · 46-50, M
Really beautiful.
Magenta · F
@Jackhoff Thanks, appreciate that.
Jackhoff · 46-50, M
@Magenta You are welcome
Quimliqer · 70-79, M
So much feeling!
Magenta · F
@Quimliqer Always with moi. 😊
DeWayfarer · 61-69, M
No poetic words of late come to mind.

No utterances long to speak.

The void consumes in timeless silences.
AllAboutLaffs · 80-89, M
This is wonderful, M !!

Really well done !!
WillaKissing · 56-60, M
I love it as well.

 
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