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Embracing winter


Drifting...

into the still placid of winter
The absence of color,
stains me with it’s melancholic comfort

Alone in this warm breath sigh,
that floats like cool fog
against a soot sky

Dawns soft laced caress
spills across the hills
I give my spirit intimately into it.

A reticent sun covered
It's intense golden heat hidden,
like a discreet lovers secret

Beyond, the north lies vast,
of snow, bone-white elegy
My restlessness held in the peace of solitude

I adore what is simple, and here
Where otherwise anechoic,
the slow creak of branches and the flight of birds
sing for me..
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CCMorgan · 51-55, M
I've been trying to write again... not having much luck yet. You certainly surpassed me! This is lovely, and the way I wish to write... beautiful words, all linked by you in your clever way... I hope you don't mind:

Against a soot sky
Winter's bone-white elegy
My restlessness held


Your words inspire! 💜☮🤗
Magenta · F
@CCMorgan Aw I feel you! This didn't come easy, I struggled, ugh. I've been getting inspiration elsewhere.

I adore it! You know how I like haiku's and you are one of the few that knows how to create them. 😍🤗
Magenta · F
@CCMorgan P.S. I wonder if "prompts" like COI once posted, would help?
CCMorgan · 51-55, M
@Magenta Sometimes they do... I used to enjoy the challenge! ☺

I just need my mind to be in the right place, and I'm sure the words will flow again ☮