"I would like to speak to the Executive Director about the recent experience my daughter and I had at the center."
Yours is grammatically correct. Mine just flows a little better.
Yours is grammatically correct. Mine just flows a little better.
BalmyNites · F
No, you need to remove the comma after the first ‘experience’
MarkPaul · 26-30, M
No.
I wish to speak with the Executive Director about the experience of my daughter and myself at the centre.
I wish to speak with the Executive Director about the experience of my daughter and myself at the centre.
Rutterman · 46-50, M
It's fine. You could also remove the commas and it would still be okay.
NoGamesTolerated · F
“My daughter’s and my experiences”
Mamapolo2016 · F
Thanks! What did they do to you?

SW-User
Lmao 






