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What's the point of growing old

What's the point of growing old
Everything said is left as if untold
Every step vanishes from one night's sleep
Every joy erased by a tragedy

What's the point in growing old

Hands that once held a lovers embrace
Now shake uncontrollably in embarrassing haste
Smiles once held tight wide and white
Leave wrinkles and your teeth fall out what a terrible sight

What's the point of growing old
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Graylight · 51-55, F Best Comment
Allow me the hubris of revision:

Chapter One
What's the point of growing old
Everything said is left as if untold
Every step vanishes from one night's sleep
Every joy erased by a tragedy

What's the point in growing old

Hands that once held a lovers embrace
Now shake uncontrollably in embarrassing haste
Smiles once held tight wide and white
Leave wrinkles and your teeth fall out what a terrible sight

What's the point of growing old

This is a trilogy of age, because the answer to your question shifts dramatically over time. You've written the first stanzas from experiences. The others will come when they, too, are properly aged.
Graylight · 51-55, F
@Graylight Aw, thanks. Keep writing!