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pennynoodles · 56-60, F
Let's hear it!

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@pennynoodles: as soon s I'm on break

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@pennynoodles: OK here is what I have in 60swc
So many days have gone by
Since I've looked up to the sky
Holding everything inside me
Cause I don't want no one to see
Those feelings burried withing me
Hoping that you could see me finally
I sometime feel invisible to the world
Even when I speak out loud my words
I dream that one day soon
I will look again at the moon
And wish once more upon a star
That you finally see me, you that is so far
So many days have gone by
Since I've looked up to the sky
Holding everything inside me
Cause I don't want no one to see
Those feelings burried withing me
Hoping that you could see me finally
I sometime feel invisible to the world
Even when I speak out loud my words
I dream that one day soon
I will look again at the moon
And wish once more upon a star
That you finally see me, you that is so far
pennynoodles · 56-60, F
@Chantou: Yay, well done. You may feel that you're invisible but you're not, we see you and we hear you.

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@pennynoodles: aww thank u.. doesn't always feel.this way tho.. but I'll be ok