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Is there something you do that could either be seen as sweet

Or deranged depending on the other person's point of view?
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SW-User
Writing poems for someone. Lol. It can sound creepy. Or sweet. Depends on the perspective.
SW-User
@SW-User Yes.. Totally nuts
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@SW-User 馃檮 Stahp.
AliceTinker51-55, F
@SW-User yeah I get that, I see it as romantic but I guess it might be seen as stalker like in certain circumstances
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@AliceTinker 馃檮 Sometimes it's just inspirational.
Elegy46-50
@SW-User Sounds really cool, actually.
SW-User
@Elegy I swear I'm super cool with my $1 shades 馃槑
AliceTinker51-55, F
@SW-User yeah I wasn't calling you a stalker
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@AliceTinker 馃榿 I know 馃檲
MontanamanM
@SW-User I love to post random poetry to someone's post, and I've gotten mixed reactions, 99% of the time, it's not romantic towards that individual, just my thoughts craving to come out and touch them.


"I've Watched You Walk"


I've watched you walk

between the sunshine and the rain.

I've watched you walk

on a tightrope, between pleasure and pain.

I've watched you walk

on the edge of sanity and madness.

Iv'e watched you walk

on the borderline of joy and sadness.

Girl, you're the epitome

of a double-edged sword...

Dancin' with the Devil,

and prayin' with the Lord.

I've watched you walk

into my life, and right out of it, again and again.

Yet; I can't figure you out,

nor; do I know where we are going, or where we will end.

You seem to think

that it's all a game-

To the victor, the spoils-

To the loser, it's shame.

I've watched you walk

between the realm of life and death.

Between every single heartbeat-

Between every precious breath.

I've watched you walk on water,

I've seen you spread your wings and fly.

I've brought you up when you were down-

You've brought me down, when you were high.

Girl, you're drivin' me crazy,

and I don't know what I'm gonna' do.

I guess I'll just keep on keepin' on-

Watchin' you walk, 'cause I just don't know what else to do with you.

-Kelly.
Elegy46-50
@Montanaman You're amazing.
SW-User
@Montanaman This is beautiful!!
Especially: "I've watched you walk on the borderline of joy and sadness."
Thanks for sharing!!
@Elegy @Montanaman Ah.. Bromance. 鉁岋笍
@Montanaman I think that鈥檚 very cool. 馃槉
Elegy46-50
@DarkHeaven you with those fingers. 馃檲
SW-User
@Montanaman I enjoy when others add to my writing or post on a different twist.
MontanamanM
@DarkHeaven Lolz,馃槉 Bromancing the stone 馃槈
@Elegy
One 馃枙馃徎 and a 馃憡馃徎
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TJNewtonM
@SW-User Hi were you Littleboxofsecrets on EP ?
SW-User
@SW-User I agree. Poetry is a killer for me, especially from one person in particular..it goes straight to my heart. I've had others do it and it's creepy.
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@TJNewton I sure was!!馃槉
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@SW-User 馃 I hope they keep writing for you
TJNewtonM
@SW-User Wow are you still the same now as you were then ?
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@SW-User Oh do I as well. Sigh馃槍

Thank you馃
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@TJNewton Oh dear God no..I am tame and no longer write like I once did.
TJNewtonM
@SW-User I'm glad to hear it 馃憤