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I Am Being Driven Insane By Desire

[center]Run your fingers through my hair. Love me. Protect me.
Pull it hard. Use me. Abuse me.
Leave your marks all over my body.
Scar my heart. I'll never let it heal.
Adore me. Ruin me.

My soul, my body, my mind, my world...my whole existence is on fire.
You look like innocence but taste like sin. Let me sin.

Don't let me die before I taste your sweet wine.
Be a part of me. Live in me. Live in me for one night that I will call eternity...for all eternity. [/center]

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elfie · 51-55, F

@NaughtyAmber: Wish there were more here like you.

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SW-User

Song, poem or ididnotfart original thought?

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SW-User

@hyg346: wow.THANK YOU!

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@IDidNotFart: you're very welcome ididnotfart :)

elfie · 51-55, F

🤗@IDidNotFart:

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@LittleAnnie: You look exactly like her in your picture!

Classified · M

It's expressive :)
I couldn't even pull a girls hair if I liked her though. I'd feel bad about myself for hurting her.

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Classified · M

@SW-User I'll find a girl who likes being treated as delicate one day. 😌

SW-User

@Classified We all do. Just not [i]all the time[/i]...

Classified · M

@SW-User Yeah, that's the part that worries me. 😅
But I know there are different tastes. Some do like it all the time, I think. However, perhaps if I had a girl who wouldn't like it all the time, I could try to be responsive to that. I hope I can do it without hating myself. :(

elfie · 51-55, F

That is a great poem, you should be proud of yourself for writing all that in English too!

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elfie · 51-55, F

@IDidNotFart: I can't wait to read more of yours.

SW-User

@elfie: I'll try to post something one of these days.🙂

elfie · 51-55, F

@IDidNotFart: Don't go to an extra trouble on my behalf!

JustAHappyPerson · 31-35, M

Nice one... 😍

SW-User

@JustAHappyPerson: Thank you.

Arjun90 · 31-35, M

Not the last line ! Eternity twice! Just saying 😇

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@Arjun90: I still think you did't get what I said and I don't have any other way to explain it.

Arjun90 · 31-35, M

@IDidNotFart: yes two people can't have the same view 😇 but its nice 😎👍

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@Arjun90: Thank you.

Khenpal1 · M

That No was a lady's legs with nicely heeled shoes.

That No is the best No of all.

When a gentleman smiles, a good man,

That No is the beauty of his hips.

When you watch the gait of youths as they walk with alternating cheek rhythm,

When you watch their behinds,

That No is fantastic thighs, not fat or thin but taut in their strenth,

Lovable or leaveable.

That No is shoulders that turn in or expand the chest,

sad or happy,

Without giving in to a deep sigh.

That No is No of all No's.

Relaxation or restraint is in question.

Nobody knows that big No,

But we alone know that No."

UnrestrictedHappy ·

Amazingly written, simply passionate and image inspiring.

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@UnrestrictedHappy Thank you.🙂

elfie · 51-55, F

Some women have all the luck! Did this actually happen?

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@elfie 😥

Elegy · 46-50

I'll think about it.

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Elegy · 46-50

@IDidNotFart: 😣

But but but..
[youtube=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sMPNjPpdjKU]

SW-User

@Feedbacker: right😏

Elegy · 46-50

@IDidNotFart:
[youtube=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dPZQ7ZLy3MI]

rickoo164 · 56-60, M

I love it, very nicely written...!

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@rickoo164: Thank you!

rickoo164 · 56-60, M

@IDidNotFart: The title is very inspering me, very nicely said...

SW-User

This depicts my sexual desire extremely well. Love it!

mathsman · 70-79, M

Yesssssss pleeeeeease
Such intensity leads to such wild pleasure

Rutterman · 46-50, M

I like this. Wonderful expression of sexual desire.

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@Rutterman: Thank you!

PrisinorOne · M

you took the words right out of my mouth :O <3 <3
i miss talking to you. <3 <3

DragonFruit · 61-69, M

Very well written….but I have no desire to scar you or abuse you.

[youtube=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EZldnP0lhHA]

Krazykatie · 31-35, F

I need that so bad

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@Krazykatie 😞

Krazykatie · 31-35, F

Please destroy me like that

AllAboutLaffs · 70-79, M

This really is wonderful ... passionate.

Teggy

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Teggy

@SW-User good girl 😋

SW-User

@Teggy 😳🙈

Teggy

@SW-User haha my kinda girl 🤓

Challenger1 · M

That was good. Twisted, but good

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@Challenger1 Thank you.

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SW-User

@AmandaAngel Thank you so much!!

PerfectionOfTheHeart · 46-50, F

So passionate and raw. Love it!

SW-User

@PerfectionOfTheHeart Thank you!🙂

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@GypsyKing: Oh, thank you!

Coppercoil · M

This is amazing.

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@Coppercoil: Thank you.

chilloutab2 · 41-45, M

Wow!! Just wow!

SW-User

😐😐😐

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@IDidNotFart: It's rough

SW-User

@HopelessRomantick: Hmmmm maybe a little.

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@IDidNotFart: Little😢

SerenitiesScars · 31-35, M

I wont let you die...

okaybut · 56-60, M

Nice. :)

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@okaybut: Thank you.🙂

UnrestrictedHappy ·

Stunningly descriptive. You can feel the desire there and almost see the hunger directed towards the one for whom you penned it..sublime.

Allelse · 36-40, M

I would but I'm married and you said you didnt want to be a 'Wife number 2". So no being treated like an object for you!

missit15 · 56-60, M

Wow, that was really well written. keep a book of your writings... one day you may get them all published!

DarkHeaven ·

I taste your words like the broken glass that I love to swallow. It’s cuts me up inside but I do so love it’s pain. 🖤

SW-User

if you said that to me, i would make sure to bring enough cake for both of us 😇

WizzBitt · 41-45, M

Did you write this ? Or are these words that you can communicate with ?

Mysteriousliaisons · 56-60, M

I still savour this poem of yours upon my lips 👄. 😉

Coppercoil · M

@Mysteriousliaisons 😲🤔

SteelHands · 61-69, M

That's a hen looking at a rooster alright.

Glad I got to read this. .

abe182 · 46-50, M

Damn! 😮😨🤤🤗
Your words...!
Have your way with me.

SW-User

Really like this piece of poetry!

cheesyAF · 31-35, M

I don't like it.

SW-User

Perfect

MrSmooTh · 31-35, M

If you insist

boondock3737 · 46-50, M

Best poem ever

Afterdark · 51-55, M

Excellent

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