I Will Take As Many Words As I Want To Write This Story
---For Her---
My reply to the challenge of May16th.
Choose at least four of the words below: Cage Leash Unraveled Seduced Blur Lost (And by request "feminine" )
FOR HER---
She was a fireball of temperament and passion. And yet, she had that sparkling smile- You know the one. The one that may make a young man smile inside N' melt an older man's heart. Yes, that one. Sly glance and all.
Maybe that was the attraction if one can be so obvious or even callous? Yet, I always saw it as a lot more. More than a smile and more than any temperament. Or even a learned opinion.. There was a certain spark with her. Oh with many to be sure, But I am not speaking of them and how darling they are. Just her.
I saw how other women regaled her;confiding secrets to her other ears never heard. I am sure you are all aware of secret smiles and how they can leave you wondering. She was as a caged bird set free, whose femininity, although never restrained, shone Much brighter now that the shackles fell loose. I could let myself love her. If only..
I took her in my arms. Skin against skin, breathe against breath. Two souls searching. No longer lost, no longer inhibited by conditions and expectations she was as a seductress. One who let herself be seduced at times! It was life energy but it was renewed life energy. A lost little girl no more she loved with the desire of a woman in love with life itself.
My advice---do fall in love with a poet!
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SW-User
How can I count how many things I love about this?! You just wrote with the oldschool passion I remember! I've read it several times over, taking something new away from it each time. What girl wouldn't want to fall in love with a poet?! This is a beautiful ode...I'm green with envy at how you pull it off. The picture goes perfectly with your words. Wonderful work as always, my sweet friend, with an extra spark to this one. Your mind is magical.🌷✨
@SW-User You make my smile. You truly do. I loved writing this and I wrote it with a consumed passion and rush for fear my words would escape my mind! I I did not want that as who this was wrote for-if any at all--I wanted to feel special and adored. I think most of us would like that to some degree.
You may be right in that this does tap into the me of old. Notice it was even titled as Poe titled many of his?? Old souls?
I am glad you loved this and that you saw what you did in it.
Falling in love with a poet, just once, is a must!! 🤗
SW-User
@Elandra77 It was brilliant and the title was noted. This most definitely has the old feel you once wrote in. Bravo & welcome back, from my viewpoint!♡
