Please for the love of god, help me fix this run-on sentence

”However, I am having difficulty figuring out whether, if by starting the process to get the visa, I will be directed to the process of proving my eligibility for aliyah at some point as part of the A/1 visa application process as a whole, or if I must complete a separate process of proving my eligibility to make aliyah, and only then can I use that to begin applying for the A/1 visa.”

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BlueVeins · 22-25 Best Comment

”However, I am having difficulty figuring out whether -- if by starting the process to get the visa -- I will be directed to the process of proving my eligibility for aliyah at some point as part of the A/1 visa application process as a whole, or if I must complete a separate process of proving my eligibility to make aliyah, at which point I can use that to begin applying for the A/1 visa.”

i'd say keep the sentence, just clear up the mechanics to make it slightly more readable.

Zeuro · 26-30, F

@BlueVeins what do you mean by the mechanics?

Zeuro · 26-30, F

@BlueVeins I feel like yours feels the most right. Thanks!