I Live In My Head Too Much

Taking breaks into reality, attempting to step on solid ground.
With each breath expecting the plummet.

I seek retreat back into my own comfort.

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lovingdead · 31-35, M

You write beautifully

Serenitree · F

@lovingdead I agree. She says so much, with so few words. Eloquent.

lovingdead · 31-35, M

@Serenitree well put i worry about being to verbose all the time, enough to get the point across, little enough to leave you wanting more.

Serenitree · F

@lovingdead Yes. This is the kind of writing I've been missing on SW. This and longer pieces with the same kind of talent and eloquence.